Esalam Alaikom Marhba (Peace be on to you in arabic) My name is AbdulRhman I come from Doha/Qatar I lived in Qatar 11 years I am now studying in Qatar Academy, every Friday I play sqaush and even I play football but I don't like to study math and even I hate to play baseball.


My first Draft
You should not distroy qatar because it's a lovley country and we have been bliding some nice hotels and some nice malls and some nice muesmes and even some lovely resrunts and even it has some bueitful island it is the Pearl,it has alot of shops and even it has so many of hotels and you even can build you a house there.But its so lovely.

Qatar has alot of lovely malls for shopping like landmark and even there is nice shopps like Carrefour,Tivoli,Hagendaz,and more. And even City Center is a good place it has a cinma,and alot of restrunts.skating rink are and alot more.But even villago its a wonderfull place there are alot of shopps like Louis Vitton,Gucci, Bulgari,D&G,Fendi,Van Cleef and cartier but there are more alot but these stores are very lovely.And even there are alot of restrunts, you will love villago alot but the bad thing in it is it's very big.

We have alot of divers here in qatar and they have alot of money even because they got us some pearls and even the pearls are very expenseve and even valuebul.But in old days some of the divers were dieing because when they go down some sharks eat them and its not nice.And we are even famous about horse riding and we even have a big clup only for the horses and its very nice.And we even have the bigest indoor sport gym and it is aspire its very nice and huge because all of the sports is inside it there is football area swimming pool and even alot of the spotrs and thats very nice and please if you come and visit us in Qatar please come to Aspire.

Qatar is a penunsiula, we have some tredtional clothing like the men wear a something called thob its like a dress but its more nicer,and they even wear a "gahfya" on there head and then above it the "kitra" and then finially they were a "ogal".But the girls were something called "abaya" they just were the "abaya"when they want to go out. But its so nice because its colered from the sleives and even from there back and even from the down.


SO PLEASE DONT DISTROY QATAR its a lovely country you even can have fun in it everybody loves qatar even there is no problems that are alot that happens.


My Second Draft
You should not distroy qatar because it's a beatiful country we have been bliding some nice hotels and some lovely malls and some nice muesmes and even some lovely resrunts and even it has a bueitful island it is called the Pearl,it has alot of shops and even it has so many of hotels and you even can build you a house there.But its so lovely.That maybe evrybody visted it.

Qatar has alot of lovely malls for shopping like landmark there are nice shopps like Carrefour,Tivoli,Hagendaz,and more. And even City Center is a good place it has a cinma,and alot of restrunts.skating rink arae and alot of more.But even villago its a wonderfull place there are alot of shopps like Louis Vitton,Gucci, Bulgari,D&G,Fendi,Van Cleef and Cartier but there are more alot but these stores are very lovely.And even there are alot of restrunts, you will love villago alot but the bad thing in it is it's very big.

We have alot of divers here in qatar and they have alot of money because they got for us some pearls and even the pearls are very expenseve and even valuebul.But this was in the old days some of the divers were dieing because when they go down some sharks eat them and its not nice.And we are even famous about horse riding and we even have a big clup only for the horses and its very nice.And we even have the bigest indoor sport gym and it is Aspire its very nice and huge because all of the sports is inside it there is football area swimming pool and even alot of the spotrs and thats very nice and please if you come and visit us in Qatar please come to Aspire.

Qatar is a penunsiula, we have some tredtional clothing like the men wear a something called "thob" its like a dress but its more nicer,and they even wear a "gahfya" on there head and then above it the "kitra" and then finially they were a "ogal".But the girls were something called "abaya" and then the "shayla" they just wear it when they want to go out. But its so nice because its colered from the sleives and even from there back and even from the down.

SO PLEASE DON'T DESTROY QATAR it's a lovely country you even can have fun it everybody loves Qatar even there is no problems that are alot that happen.And even we didnt do any thing to you