GEDS-Willem

Dear Pen Pals, My name is Willem and my favorite sport is soccer. Also it is football and basketball I like swimming to. I live in Kensington Maryland I have brown eyes and brown hair and I have sister that is 11 years old. I like to travel a lot. I like sugar to. My house has three floors in it I have a mom and a dad. I am white skinned Also. I have friends there names are Sarah and Ian. I like to eat cereal I like playing with legos. eat noodels I have pet sea monkeys. I like to cook with my mom. My dad works. I go to the pool in the summer and the winter and I am on to swim teams. My house is kind of big I like to play outside a lot. From, Willem

Tell the aliens a good story about the Earth or face annihilation!!!

Rough Draft:

It has good food like chocolate and ice cream. It is the only planet you can breath on. There is lots of stuff that you can do. Like sports the kinds of sports there is Tennis,Soccer,Baseball,Basketball,Football,Track. Tell them thousands of jokes and tell them you can watch T.V. and play video games you can play outside. and you could go sky diving. Play hockey eat a burger go hiking. BLOW UP ANOTHER PLANET. Go on a ship and sale away from here.

Second Draft:

It has good food like chocolate and ice cream. It is the only planet you can breath on. There is lots of stuff that you can do. Like sports the kinds of sports there is tennis, soccer, baseball, basketball, football, track. Tell them thousands of jokes and tell them you can watch T.V. and play video games you can play outside. and you could go sky diving. Play hockey eat a burger go hiking. BLOW UP ANOTHER PLANET. Go on a ship and sale away from here.