ISB_Pete

Hi! My name is Pete. I like to play online computer games, and eating pizza and eating macaroni. I like creating new creations out of Lego bricks. My favorite subject in school is math and reading. The kind of Lego that Lego company created I like the most is Bionicle. I also like deep fried chicken. One of my favorite books are Diary of a Wimpy Kid series. I also like Pokemon. I have two fine friends named Luke and Vincent. My favorite thing to do is play with my friends and cousins.

.//This is my first draft.// Why Would The Alien Destroy Malls?

Prepare to enter our world for we entertain you with what we have here on earth. The topics will be the department stores: Paragon, Emporium and Central. In Paragon, you can actually eat at the super markets; an aquarium with fish that have superb abilities and the aquarium also have a theater for 4D movies! That’s not just it; we also have 3D movie theaters and plain movie theaters and popcorn in many flavors.

In Emporium, there are rare gems like diamonds, emeralds and rubies. There is also an arcade on the 3rd floor. On the 4th floor there many different kinds of clothes.

In Central, there is a food loft with foods from many countries. There is also a supermarket that you can accessories straight away! There is also a bookstore on the 7th floor. In case the people in the bookstore get thirsty,

__//**This is my second dra**//__**//__ft__//** Why Would The Alien Destroy Malls?

Prepare to enter our world for we entertain you with what we have here on earth. The topics will be the department stores: Paragon, Emporium and Central. In Paragon, you can actually eat at the super markets; an aquarium with fish that have superb abilities and the aquarium also have a theater for 4D movies! That’s not just it; we also have 3D movie theaters and plain movie theaters and popcorn in many flavors.

In Emporium, there are rare gems like diamonds, emeralds and rubies. There is also an arcade on the 3rd floor. On the 4th floor there many different kinds of clothes.

In Central, there is a food loft with foods from many countries. There is also a supermarket that you can accessories straight away! There is also a bookstore on the 7th floor. In case the people in the bookstore get thirsty; they have a coffee and teashop named Coffee World. This is a peaceful place for malls. So I suggest that you shouldn’t destroy Thailand. Now that you are entertained, you won’t destroy Thailand. Right?

__//**This is my final draft**//__ Why Would The Alien King Destroy Malls? By: Pete

Prepare to enter our world for we entertain you with what we have here on earth. The topic that we will discuss is department stores. In Paragon, you can actually eat in the super markets. In Paragon they also have an aquarium with fish that have superb abilities, and the aquarium also has a theater for 4D movies! That’s not just it; we also have 3D movie theaters, plain movie theaters and popcorn in many flavors!

In Emporium, there are rare gems like diamonds, emeralds, and rubies. There is also an arcade on the 3rd floor. On the 4th and 2nd floors they’re many different kinds of clothing.

In Central, there is a food loft with foods from many countries. There is also a supermarket that you can accessories straight away! There is also a bookstore on the 7th floor. In case the people in the bookstore get thirsty; they have built a coffee and half teashop named Coffee World. This is a peaceful country for malls. So I suggest that you shouldn’t destroy Thailand. Now that you are entertained, you won’t destroy our country Thailand. Do you agree with us your majesty?