KR+-+David+C

Hi my name is David. I am 10 years old. I am in grade four. I have dark brown hair and I have brown eyes. I have a sister named Elizabeth. I have a lot of snow right now. We have summer just like you. Some people think we have snow during the summer, but in summer we don't have any snow. My family is lucky because we have a huge house. That is what my life is like. Bye for now

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First copy!

Dear Chef zen, I happing to convince you why you should not destroy Canada.If you got to know Canada you would be saying,I want to live here.

The view is auwsame. You can see the mountains, the wood land and all the green grass.

All the celebration you can have like Canada day you would feel proud to live in Canada.

You could win tickets to see this years olympics.It will be held in British Columbia. Our country is more safe because we have no wars. That is is why I think Canada should not be blowned up.

2nd draft

Dear Chef zen, I am hoping to convince you why you should not destroy Canada. If you got to know Canada you would be saying, "I want to live here." Canada is a magnificient place. I have lived in Canada for 10 years and I think it is spectacular. I'm going to give you 3 reasons why you shouldn't blow up Canada. Instead you should join us.

The first reason is the view is awesome. You can see the mountains, the wood land and all the green grass. Our country is the 2nd biggest country in the world but were not crowded. You can explorer the outside by traveling around by walking, flying, driving, and biking. Our mountains are huge and it's awesome to look up at. Our woods are full of trees and wildlife. If you went for a walk you could see deer, birds, coyotes, bunnies, racoons, foxes, and fishers. Our fields are full of green grass and flowers. Chief Zen you would be lucky to live here.

The next reason is Canada has lots of celebrations. Like Canada Day. Canada Day is when we celebrate our country. We have a parade with army bands, people dressed up with Canadian symbols on them, big trucks, clowns, people doing acrobats, and horses and dogs. At night we have fireworks. We celebrate people's birthdays. We have religious holidays like Christmas and Easter. You would feel proud to live in Canada.

You could win tickets to see this years olympics.It will be held in British Columbia. Our country is more safe because we have no wars. That is is why I think Canada should not be blowned up.Dear Chef zen, _______________________________________________________________________________________________

Final draft

Dear Chef zen, I am hoping to convince you why you should not destroy Canada. If you got to know Canada you would be saying, "I want to live here." Canada is a magnificient place. I have lived in Canada for 10 years and I think it is spectacular. I'm going to give you 3 reasons why you shouldn't blow up Canada. Instead you should join us.

The first reason is the view is awesome. You can see the mountains, the wood land and all the green grass. Our country is the 2nd biggest country in the world but were not crowded. You can explorer the outside by traveling around by walking, flying, driving, and biking. Our mountains are huge and it's awesome to look up at. Our woods are full of trees and wildlife. If you went for a walk you could see deer, birds, coyotes, bunnies, racoons, foxes, and fishers. Our fields are full of green grass and flowers. Chief Zen you would be lucky to live here.

The next reason is Canada has lots of celebrations. Like Canada Day. Canada Day is when we celebrate our country. We have a parade with army bands, people dressed up with Canadian symbols on them, big trucks, clowns, people doing acrobats, and horses and dogs. At night we have fireworks. We celebrate people's birthdays. We have religious holidays like Christmas and Easter. You would feel proud to live in Canada.

You could win tickets to see this years olympics.It will be held in British Columbia. Our country is more safe because we have no wars. That is is why I think Canada should not be blowned up.