ISB_Emmy

Hi! My name is Emmy and I come from Thailand. I am nine years old. My favorite colors are pink and gold and anything glittery. Reading and dancing are my hobbies. My favorite foods are pizza and ice cream. Badminton is my favorite sport. Strawberries, cherries and guava are my favorite fruits.

Your highness, you should not destroy Thailand because of its beaches. The three beaches I would like to tell you about are Koh Yao Noi, Hua Hin, and Phuket because I think they are the most spectacular beaches in Thailand. Koh Yao Noi is a tranquil place. The sunset is breathtaking there, where the clouds are pink and there are many colors in the sky. Another good thing about Koh Yao Noi is that it is windy. You will not be too hot or too cold. The waves there are wild, so you can do sailing. This is a sport where you control a boat with the wind by the sail. A sail is a thick cloth. Hua Hin has a lot of brilliant shopping malls, like Complex, with Toys-r-us. I have been to Hua Hin before and my favorite part of the province is the fresh air. It will be a break from the alien environment. Plus, Hua Hin has a lot of apartments; you could live in one if you like Hua Hin so much! Phuket is known for their superb seafood. These restaurants serve their food fresh and most are good. I have been around this island and the people are generous and friendly. I really love this place. You can travel from the main island of Phuket to other islands in less than one hour with speedboats. There are many speedboats so you don’t need to wait for one! Trust me Your Majesty! Thailand is NOT worth destroying!
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Your highness, you should not destroy Thailand because of its beaches. The three beaches I am telling going you about are Koh Yao Noi, Hua Hin, and Phuket because I think they are the most spectacular beaches in Thailand. Koh Yao Noi is a tranquil place. The sunset is breathtaking there, where the clouds are pink and there are many colors in the sky. Another good thing about Koh Yao Noi is that it is windy. You won’t be too hot or too cold. Because of the wind, you can do sports like sailing. This sport is where you control a boat with the wind by the sail. A sail is a thick cloth. Hua Hin has a lot of brilliant shopping malls, like Complex, with Toys-r-us. I have been to Hua Hin before and my favorite part of the province is the fresh air. It will be a break from the alien environment. Plus, Hua Hin has a lot of apartments; you could live in one if you think Hua Hin is so magnificent! Phuket is known for their superb seafood. These restaurants serve their food fresh and most are good. I have been around this island and the people are generous and friendly. You can travel from the main island of Phuket to other islands in less than one hour with speedboats. Also, you don’t have to wait for one speedboat since there are so many of them. Trust me Your Majesty! Thailand is NOT worth destroying!
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Your highness, you should not destroy Thailand because of its beaches. The three beaches I am telling going you about are Koh Yao Noi, Hua Hin, and Phuket. I think they are the most spectacular beaches in Thailand. The first beach I am telling you about is Koh Yao Noi. Koh Yao Noi is a tranquil place. I thought Koh Yao Noi was the best beach in Thailand because it was a break from Bangkok’s (Thailand’s capital) enviorment, which has a lot of smoke from cars. The sunset is breathtaking there, where the clouds are pink and there are many colors in the sky. Another good thing about Koh Yao Noi is that it is windy.You won’t be too hot or too cold. Because of the wind, you can do sports like sailing. You be too hot or too cold. . This sport is where you control a boat with the wind by the sail. A sail is a thick cloth. Hua Hin is another great beach. Hua Hin is a bit more modern than some provinces in Thailand. They have Roxy and Billabong that sell for cheaper prices. Hua Hin also has a lot of shopping malls, like Complex, with Toys-r-us. In my opinion, my favorite part of the province is the fresh air. It will be a break from your alien environment. Plus, Hua Hin has a lot of apartments; you could live in one if you think Hua Hin is so magnificent. Finally, Phuket is the last beach to tell you about. Phuket is known for their superb seafood. These restaurants serve their food newfangled I have been around this island and the people are generous and friendly. You can travel from the main island of Phuket to other islands in less than one hour with speedboats. Also, you don’t have to wait for one speedboat since there are so many of them. Trust me Your Majesty! Thailand is so oustanding that it is NOT worth destroying!
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