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Hi! I'm Jonathan.I am 10 and I enjoy working on the computer. I also like learning about new things. I live in Winder, Georgia in the United States of America. I think that this story will be a lot of fun to write. I hope that you do too. I think that working with other people around the globe will be fun. I feel very lucky to have this opportunity to communicate on line with my partners. I can't wait!!!!!

Far into the future something terrible happened; an alien spaceship wanted to take over Earth. They wanted to do this so that the other aliens of their planet could have more room for houses and dumps. The spaceship was the size of Australia and it was full of alien warriors ready to take on Earth's defences. They came from the galaxy Zubtan and from the planet Zwinddle. When they were 1,987,285 light years away from Earth the Hubble shot a picture of it in the year 5019. Directly after Earth got the picture they told the Hubble to take to pictures with 1 second in between each other and they realized that the allien spaceship was traveling at 5,723 times the speed of light.The Earth had only a few days until the alliens attack. Every leader of the world got together to discus the matter.While the leaders were arguing a strange thing happened, a boy named Zack about the age of 10 came in and suggested telling the aliens a story so that they would not kill all of the human race. He also suggested that there be a contest for the best story. Every writter in the world would be competing for the best story. After a while of thinking Zack had an idea of what his story should be about. The day before the aliens came the judges decided that Zack's story was the best of them all. When the aliens landed Zack had rehaearsed the speech seventy three times but now it was the real thing. He had every human hoping and praying that the story telling idea would work or else the Earth's forces would have to fight the alien warriors. "Aliens will you come in peace. We have prepared a story for you if you decide not to kill us. I am Zack Smith and I was chosen to read you the story that I have worked very hard to prepare for you. The story is about a young boy that tries to do the best for his people but somehow he always messes up." recited Zack. The aliens looked surprised by the peoples friendliness. They huddled up to discus the matter amongst themselves. After a few minutes of debating an alien that was different then all of the others steped out and said, "I am king Zatan and I wish to hear your story.I think that I will enjoy it since it was a world wide competition." Zack was surprised about how much the aliens already knew and he was hoping the story would impress the alien king Zatan. "Let's see what it is shall we. But remember if I don't like it prepare to be terminated." Shocked by the sudden agreement and intrest he lead Zatan to a forest where no-one would guess they were. The story started with an interesting first sentence. "It started like this, there once was a young boy who tried to do everthing right but somehow he always messed up. To be exact the kid was not just a kid but he was a prince and his dad was 57, so the prince would take the thrown in a few years.The prince's name was Hunter and he was 18, Hunter had a brother named Cody and he was 19.(Unlike Hunter, Cody was neat, tidy and //very// intelligent.)The worst part about Cody was he was selfish and he tried to beat Hunter in everything. Once Hunter tried to even play in a simple thing for fun, a playing of chess but Cody didn't take it that way. Instead he told Hunters opponent the best moves at the right times and Hunter lost.(Cody felt that if Hunter did anything right that Hunter would take the thrown from him and that would make Cody furious.) Cody did many other creul things to Hunter as well. There were only three years until a new king would be chosen.Cody got even meaner than ever before. Now Cody even started to cheat to win. Hunter was working even harder that ever to prove to his dad that he was not a walking talking failure. Hunter started putting everything in an organized place. Once the king had a problem. There was a raiding party near the border and the king sent Hunter to try to have peace with them. Hunter was excited that he was chosen for something so important. Hunter took this opportunity like a prize possession. He would do anything to get at least this one thing right. "I hope he does it right because that could determine if he is king or not," said Zatan. "So Hunter went to the border where the raiding party was waiting armed with sledgehammers and other dangerous objects. The people started yelling at him. They were surprised to see that the same man who had messed with them many times before was standing in front with them again. This time Hunter did not tell them to leave right away (that would get them even more angry). Hunter asked what the matter was and tried to solve it. Hunter eventually realized that they were angry because someone robbed them and they told their kids to tell the guards at the castle while they chased off the the robber and of course the castle guards did not beleive the kids. Then Hunter told them that he would tell the king. When Hunter got back he told the king what the problem was and the king solved the rest." "Yes he got right," said Zatan. "Oh! I forgot, the kings name is Jeffery," said Zack. "As I was saying, the king solved the robbery and the robber was Nick. Nick gave the money back to the people who he robbed.The only bad thing was when two judges named Jack and Allan had to prove that Nick did the rob the people. Hunter did many other good deeds to Jeffery. When the time came for Jeffery to pick who would be the next king, he had to hold a contest. If anyone cheated they would be disqualified (nobody likes a cheater the king belived). The contest was to see who could sovle the most conflicts well in a single day. When the day was over Cody had solved 18 conflicts, and Hunter had solved 23. Then Hunter was selected as the new king and the next day he faced his first major conflict as leader. He found out that there were underground shops selling illeagal drugs. Hunter solved most of the problem by threatening to put them in prison. Then he remembered that Cody was very upset when he was not chosen to be king. Hunter concluded that Cody was not trying to be bad but instead to impress his father. So Hunter let Cody solve the rest of the matter. In the end, Hunter and Cody led the best, most peaceful country in the world. Cody soon adjusted to the fact that he was not the king and he lived a good, happy life without any envy of his brother." said Zack. " The story was wonderful can I have a copy." said Zatan. Zack told Zatan that he would print him a copy if he would not kill the whole human race. It turned out that Zatan only wanted to combine planets with Earth against the evil forces of the Black Light an evil alien force that was at war with the good force of The Big Z. Earth combined forces with The Big Z and eventuly defeated Black Light. Zwinddle and Earth were combine forces ever since. Untill__...............__

To be continued