KR+-+Corey+S

Hi my name is Corey & I love video games. I have no brothers & no sisters. I have dark chocolate colour hair & light skin. My family is nice to me. I like cinnamin rolls. My favorite sport is soccer and I like playing it in the gym. I am in grade 3. I am good at math.

My Brainstorm



Cheif Zen, I beg you not to destroy Canada, I suspect you judged us to quickly, here are some reasons why you should not destroy Canada. Sports, you can win 3 types of medels in the olympics. Winter olympics are hard training for. Sports are really fun. Second of all music is fun to listen to. People have favourite music. People have different styles of music. Third is Bring all your stuff from your home to here to make you feel more at home. Canada has lots of fun things to do. People have different colour of skin. Cheif Zen, if you have noticed how great Canada is you wouldn't want to blow up this great country.

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Second Draft. Chief Zen, I beg you not to destroy Canada, I suspect you judged us to quickly, here are some reasons why you shouldn't destroy Canada. Sports, you can win 3 types of medals in the Olympic. Winter Olympics are hard training for. Sports are really fun. Second of all, music is fun to listen to. People have favourite music. People have different styles of music. Third is Bring all your stuff from your home to here to make you feel more at home. Canada has lots of fun things to do. People have different colour of skin. Cheif Zen, if you have noticed how great Canada is you wouldn't want to blow up this great country.

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Chief Zen, I beg you not to destroy Canada, I suspect you judged us to quickly, here are some reasons why you shouldn't destroy Canada.

In 2010 Canada will be hosting the Olympics in Canada. Sports, you can win 3 types of medals in the Olympics. Winter Olympics are hard training for. Sports are really fun and good for exercising.

Second of all, music is fun to listen to. People have favourite music. People have different styles of music. In Canada you can listen to any music you want to.

Third is Bring all your stuff from your home to here to make you feel more at home. Canada has lots of fun things to do. People have different colour of skin. You would like Canada as your home because I like our games and there are no wars.

Chief Zen, if you have noticed how great Canada is you wouldn't want to blow up this great country.