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Ih (Hi) my name is Savannah (put a space) Allen (.) I live ni (in) c(C) incinnati Ohio(.) Here is my story The i(I) nvisible Alien(.)

One day an in invisible aline (alien) came to earth. My mom sent me to bed. The invisible aline (alien) pushed me right at the edge of my bed. He said I will destroy you by a pinch. So he took me to his planet. He said what are you going to say and I said can I go home now. He said no I mean yes. I(space ) will  see you nexs (next) time aline (alien). So I went home. The end

I will really like if you will add more details, and you should add commas because that will help the story get better! From Gal