ISB_Domi

Hi! My name is Domi. I am a girl. My favorite color is turquoise. I love soccer. My favorite animal is a horse.They are very very strong. They have very muscular legs. They have many colors, white, brown, black and gray If you destroy the earth you will never see them again.


 * My First Draft**

Persuade alien king not to destroy Thailand Your majesty why will you destroy Thailand. You know there is lots of places in Thailand for a very nice vacation, like Phuket, Cat Island and Mouse Island.

Phuket beach Phuket beach has a very clean water and there are lots of flowers. Many seashells. Crabs and sea plants all around the cove of Phuket beach. Different clothes colorful and fascinating. Besides the views from the mountains are very incredible.

Cat Island Cat Island is located at the southern of Thailand. Lots of colorful sea anemones down by the cove. In compare the Cat Island is smaller than Mouse Island. Beautiful flowers with lots of colors. Of course don’t forget the sand, it’s brilliant.

Mouse Island Mouse Island is big. It’s really near Cat Island. There’s very splendid adventure waiting for you at Mouse Island. Mouse Island is sunny, warm and good for playing on the beach.

Well I hope you will enjoy your vacation!


 * Second Draft**

Persuade alien king not to destroy Thailand Your majesty why will you destroy Thailand. You know there are lots of places in Thailand for a very nice vacation, like at Phuket or Cat Island or Mouse Island.

Phuket beach Phuket beach has a very clean water and there they have lots of flowers. Many seashells. Crabs and sea plants all around the cove of Phuket beach. Different colorful and fascinating clothes. Besides the views from the mountains are very brilliant.

Cat Island Cat Island is located at the southern of Thailand. Lots of colorful sea anemones down by the cove. In compare the Cat Island is smaller than the Mouse Island. Beautiful flowers with lots of colors. Of course don’t forget the seashells, it’s marvelous.

Mouse Island Mouse Island is big. It’s really near Cat Island. There’s a very splendid adventure waiting for you at Mouse Island. Mouse Island is sunny, warm and good for playing in the water and lying on the sand.

Well I hope you will enjoy your vacation!

Please don’t destroy Thailand it’s not god for others.

Persuade alien king not to destroy Thailand Your majesty why will you destroy Thailand? You know there are lots of places in Thailand for a very nice vacation, like at Phuket, Cat Island or Mouse Island. Phuket beach Phuket beach has a very clean water and there they have lots of flowers, many seashells, crabs and sea plants all around the cove. They also have different colorful and fascinating clothes. Besides the views from the mountains are very brilliant. Because you can see the sparkly ocean.
 * Final Draft**

Cat Island Cat Island is located at the southern of Thailand. Lots of colorful sea anemones down by the cove. In compare the Cat Island is smaller than the Mouse Island. Beautiful flowers with lots of colors. Of course don’t forget the seashells, it’s marvelous.

Mouse Island Mouse Island is big. It’s really near Cat Island. There’s a very splendid adventure waiting for you at Mouse Island. Mouse Island is sunny, warm and good for playing in the water and lying on the sand.

Well I hope you will enjoy your vacation!

Please don’t destroy Thailand it’s not god for others.