WW_Esma

Esma's Page Hi my name is Esma. My favorite color is purple,blue,pink and black. I'm a girl. My favorite animal is a cat. My favorite food is chicken wings. My favorite book is twilight. One of my favorite movie is Pink panther 1 and 2. It's funny. I like to play on my Wii. I like like other stuff to. I have two birds and one cat. The websites I go on is addicting games, youtube, clubpenguin and other websites. I really like hangging with my friends.

that's about me.

= The great mystery =

//The last bell of school rang//.
==It was a nice sunny day. The good thing was it was Friday. Angela couldn't wait to go to her house, because her best friend was coming over to her house for a sleepover. Angela's cellphone rang it was her friend Julie. She said that she's right behind her, Angela turned around and saw Julie skipping happily to her side. She was wearing a pair of jeans and a pretty pink tank top. Hi Angela Julie shouted out loud. Hi Julie Angela was wearing a rockstar shirt and a mini skirt with legging's. You know what my uncle Leom is moving here Angela said. Cool julie said They ran to Angela's house. when they got there they started the sleepover with a snack they ate smores and milk. They ran upstairs had a party, put on make up, danced, read magazines and more. Than Angela's mom came and bought both of them goodie bags! After all that fun (and more) it was time to go to bed. They went down to her basement and went to bed. But Julie didn't really want to go to bed. So they did some truth or dares. The last dare was to move Angela's couch ( it was a very heavy couch) and then tip it over and jump of it. So Angela and Julie both did it. Then they saw this little enterance thing they wanted to see what it was (or where it would take them ). So they opend it and fell in this hole and landed in this red fat space ship thing. They flew really fast like more then 1000 light years and after 5 or 6 hours they landed somewhere but they didn't know where. Welcome earthling! said a weird creature. This was very weird. Hi Angela said.== ==Why don't you come with us? the weird creature said in a very weird voice. Woof woof Oscar was there!! Oscar was Angela's dog. woof woof Oscar followed them. You good dog Julie and Angela said. Woof woof Leom was there too. Leom what are you doing here ? Angela asked. If you didn't know I am an alien. Leom said. What this is a joke right? Angela said. No, it is not a joke.Leom said. Angela was very scared so was Julie. Leom's dad was zotzot454. That did sound like an alien name. Angela still couldn't understand. But it was easy. Angela was related to an alien. She thought it was a joke at first, but it was real! Angela asked if she (and Julie) could go home now. But Leom said there was only one way out. It was a very hard thing for aliens to do, they had to play a song on the PIANO!!!! Julie and Angela said that it wasn't hard, but for aliens it is because they don't have hands, they have long octopus arms. So they played a song on the piano and they got out, and in a few minutes they were home. They really liked there adventure but Angela still couldn't belive that she was related to an alien.==

=The End.= =___= =Secound draft (the real thing),= =The Great Mystery= =BBBBBBBBBBRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGG= =//The last bell of school rang.//= =It was a nice sunny day in California. The good thing was that it was friday. Angela couldn't wait to go to her house, because her best friend Julie was coming over for a sleep over. That's when Angela's cellphone rang. It was her friend Julie. Julie said that she was right behind her. Angela turned around and saw Julie skipping happily to her side. Julie was wearing a pink tank top with skinny jeans. "Hi Angela" Julie said excitedly. "Hi Julie" Angela said. Angela was wearing a rock star shirt with a mini skirt and leggings. "You know what? My uncle Leom is moving here. " Angela said. "Cool" Julie said. They rode their bikes over to Angela's house. Angela's mom always comes home at six to make them super. And Angela's dad was at China for his conference.So they started the party with snacks. They had smores and milk. Then ran upstaires to start the party.= = =