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One dark night I walked to the park. When we got there, I started playing on the swing. Later on when I was on the swing, a space ship landed right in front of me, “Come come” I said to Dylan and Jack. “What do you want?” Jack said. “There’s a space ship!” I yelled. The space ship was coming closer and closer. It stopped and bang the space ship door opened and some weird looking aliens walked out, “lets hide” I said to Jack and Dylan “OK” Jack and Dylan said. The aliens were walking around the park looking for people and the aliens said to come out in a weird voice and a guy with headphones on was walking around the park and the alien shot the guy, we got scared, there were space ships and more aliens coming out of the space ship and some of them had lasers and some had huge guns. They were making loud sounds. Dylan, Jack and me were trying to run back to our houses but there where aliens all around the park. We might get shot by one of the aliens, so he stayed at the park. While we were hiding, we tried to have a plan. We thought and thought and finally Jack got a plan and the plan was to call our dads and tell them to bring guns. Then our dads hid somewhere so the aliens can’t see them. When Dylan’s dad shot an alien, the other aliens called more aliens to come to the park. Later on we tried to sneak in to the space ship. Finally we got in to the space ship and tried to look for information about the aliens. There’s a paper on the ground Jack said to Dylan and Me. It might be the information so I picked it up and looked at it. It said, “the aliens are from mars and the aliens were trying to take over the world.” Then we started to look around the space ship. “Come Come” Jack said. “What” I said there’s a lot of guns. Then Dylan pressed a blue button that made all of the doors shut. Dylan was so close to pressing the red button and that nearly made the space ship blast off we were close to dying. Later we tried to open the door and it wasn’t opening we tried and tried then I said to Dylan and Jack lets try to break the window so we looked for something to smash it. Then Jack said to me “lets get a gun.” I got a gun and smashed the window and we finally got out. But our dads were in danger. To be continued........