MR_Kortney_Elizabeth



Hi my name is kortney. I am in 5th grade. My favorit subjet is spelling and science. I like to play soccer. I am a good kid I do my homework every night. Then I go and play with my friends after. I have two brothers. My dad and my mom. I have three favorit teathers. Mrs.Etts,Mrs.Lykowski and Mrs.Werth. I have a lot of friends. I am exsited to be going on to the sixth grade but I'll miss my teathers from fith grade.

Whose World Died? By: Kortney and Elizabeth “Hands up Humans!” said an alien it was November 24, 1691it was 2:00p.m.We are just getting off from school and I am the only one around. I was the only to be seen. I went home to see what was going on around here. When I got home my mom and dad where even gone. There was a note on the table. “We have taken your parents and we will be back to get you in 3weeks. See you then Sammy”. Said the aliens. I am as scared as a Halloween black cat. “What happened when I was at school?” cried Sammy. “I think that it that someone or something invaded my house.” complained Sammy. Later that night Sammy pared that her mom and dad would come back so that we can be a family again. She pared for about two weeks every day and night. She now has to feed her self. Eats milk and cereal every night and day. It has been 3 weeks and the aliens should be here any time. Then I see a space shuttle. I start running to Denver, Colorado to my grandparent’s house where I would be safe. But before I could rig the door bell they got me! They stare bring my up to the space shuttle. I thought that I was done for good. Once I got up there I was on an experimenting board. The aliens where trying to experiment on me. “HELP!!!!!!!!” yelled Sammy. The aliens keep on saying to stop yelling or we will experiment on you. “But I am scared of aliens” Sammy told the aliens. “Now listen little girl you will tell use a story or your world gets blown up.” Said the aliens. Ok but first where are my mom and dad? Why do you need to know? Because they are my parents! Ok we will get your parents. Once I get my parents I will tell you a story. Ok everybody the story is about to start. There are some reasons why you guys shouldn’t blow up the earth. Like the sandy beaches of Hawaii. The high mountaintops. Where you can go sledding and chiming. You can go and relax on the beach. You can get a relaxing pedicure. You can get all of your wrinkles gone forever. Then if you wanted to go on top of the tallest mountain go to Colorado and clime pikes peak. You could also go skiing. You will have a blast. So that is why that you guys shouldn’t blow up the earth. Yeah I think will keep the Earth.

I like-I like how you started with someone talking and made your story so you never know what is going happen next. Questions-What do the aliens do to sammy after she tells them the story? Do they give her mum and dad back?