ISB_Collin

Hi i am Collin my favorite sport is running my favorite colors are pink and blue. I am a boy i like pizza and ice cream. my hobbies are sports and mostly running. My favorite session in school is MATH.But also reading. I am 10 years old and going on 11 years old.




 * first draft (not done with the last paragraph)**

Do you know ISB is one of the largest and nicest schools in Thailand. So there is no reason to destroy, your majesty?

If you come to ISB you will be treated the same as every body black and white I am not treated badly and I am white. So believe me there is no explanation to destroying Thailand, your majesty.WE are all treated the same here in ISB we would love you to come and make some friends you can be my friend your majesty if you want to. In ISB the teachers and us love to have kids in different country’s and states and city’s so if you come you can be a new student and come from a different place.

In ISB you will love are teachers they are dazzling and exciting the teacher’s even give you candy if you haven’t herd of it candy is sweat and sour at the same time your majesty. They are unquestionable teachers if you haven’t herd of a teacher they tell you how to do math and so on. They love kids they want to be with them all they can. They want to have fun at the same time they want you to learn. They give you homework so you can study trust me my teacher gives me awesome homework. They even have games that we play.

My teacher teaches me so many things that every day I have powerful words floating in my head. P.S It gets me so dizzy. If you don’t destroy Thailand then you can meet my incredible teacher. But you have to make a promise with me you won’t destroy Thailand and I show you my incredible teacher. So we made a deal no changing your mind ok. OH my gosh I remembered if you don’t destroy Thailand then you can eat our amazing Thai food.

There is really no reason to destroy Thailand we have tropical food and no food poisoning. If you haven’t tried mango then you have to come to Thailand then you can maybe think about destroying Thailand your majesty. Trust me we have lovely fruits and they are all fresh. You don’t mined staying for a little bit and having some of are fruits for a minute get use to them. Ok I know what you are saying these are discussing but you will get use to the taste after a wile.

If you get use to the food you will never stop loving it. When you start eating Thai food you will think it looks discussing but discussing but if you don’t look at the food you will love it. So mark my word you will love Thai food, that’s only if you don’t destroy Thailand. So I know how much you want you want to destroy Thailand and I understand I wanted to run away from home then my mom said you will never have Thai food again so I decided to come home and I felt a lot better after I think about it. I am glad I didn’t go so I would have no Thai food. So please alien king I would love it if my family and I would stay alive wouldn’t your mom be made if you destroyed a different place with out asking her so think twice about destroying Thailand?

Collin's **Second Draft** Do you know ISB is one of the largest and nicest schools in Thailand? So there is no reason to destroy it, your majesty? If you come to ISB you will be treated the same as every body, black and white. I am not treated badly and I am white. So believe me there is no explanation to destroy Thailand, your majesty. We are all treated the same here in ISB. We would love you to come and make some friends you can be my friend your majesty if you want to. In ISB the teachers and us love to have kids in different country’s and states and city’s so if you come you can be a new student and come from a different place.

In ISB you will love are teachers they are dazzling and exciting the teacher’s even give you candy if you haven’t herd of it candy it is sweat and sour at the same time your majesty. They are unquestionable teachers if you haven’t herd of a teacher they tell you how to do math and so on. They love kids they want to be with them all they can. They want to have fun at the same time they want you to learn. They give you homework so you can study trust me my teacher gives me awesome homework. They even have games that we play.

My teacher teaches me so many things that every day I have powerful words floating in my head. P.S It gets me so dizzy. If you don’t destroy Thailand then you can meet my incredible teacher. But you have to make a promise with me you won’t destroy Thailand and I show you my incredible teacher. So we made a deal no changing your mind OK. OH my gosh I remembered if you don’t destroy Thailand then you can’t eat our amazing Thai food.

There is really no reason to destroy Thailand we have tropical food and no food poisoning. If you haven’t tried mango then you have to come to Thailand then you can maybe think about destroying Thailand your majesty. Trust me we have lovely fruits and they are all fresh. You don’t mined staying for a little bit and having some of are fruits for a minute, get use to them ok.Ok I know what you are saying these are discussing but you will get use to them all right.

If you get use to the food you will never stop loving it. When you start eating Thai food you will think it looks discussing but if you don’t look at the food you will love it. So mark my word you will love Thai food, that’s only if you don’t destroy Thailand. So I know how much you want to destroy Thailand and I understand I wanted to run away from home then my mom said you will never have Thai food again so I decided to come home and I felt a lot better after I think about it. I am glad I didn’t go so I would have no Thai food. So please alien king I would love it if my family and I would stay alive wouldn’t your mom be made if you destroyed a different place with out asking her so think twice about destroying Thailand?

Collin’s third draft Do you know ISB is one of the largest and nicest schools in Thailand. So there is no reason to destroy, your majesty?

If you come to ISB you will be treated the same as every body black and white I am not treated badly and I am white. So believe me there is no explanation to destroying Thailand, your majesty. We are all treated the same here in ISB. We would love you to come and make some friends you can be my friend if you want to your majesty if you want to. In ISB the teachers and us love to have kids in different country’s and states and city’s so if you come you can be a new student from a different place.

In ISB you will love are teachers they are dazzling and exciting the teacher’s even give you candy if you haven’t herd of it candy is sweat and sour at the same time your majesty. They are unquestionable teachers if you haven’t herd of a teacher they tell you how to do math and so on. They love kids they want to be with them all they can. They want to have fun at the same time they want you to learn. They give you homework so you can study trust me my teacher gives me awesome homework. They even have games that we play.

There is really no reason to destroy Thailand we have tropical food and no food poisoning if you haven’t had mango then you have to come to Thailand then you can maybe think about destroying Thailand your majesty. Trust me we have lovely fruits and they are all fresh. You don’t mind staying for a little bit and having some of are fruits for a minute gets use to them ok. Ok I know what you are saying these are disgusting bit you will get use all right.

My teacher teaches me so many things that every day I have powerful words floating in my head. P.S It gets me so dizzy. If you don’t destroy Thailand then you can meet my incredible teacher. But you have to make a promise with me you won’t destroy Thailand and I show you my incredible teacher. So we made a deal no changing your mind ok. OH my gosh I remembered if you don’t destroy Thailand then you can eat our amazing Thai food. There is really no reason to destroy Thailand we have tropical food and no food poisoning. If you haven’t tried mango then you have to come to Thailand then you can maybe think about destroying Thailand your majesty. Trust me we have lovely fruits and they are all fresh. You don’t mined staying for a little bit and having some of are fruits for a minute get use to them. Ok I know what you are saying these are discussing but you will get use to the taste after a wile.

If you get use to the food you will never stop loving it. When you start eating Thai food you will think it looks discussing but discussing but if you don’t look at the food you will love it. So mark my word you will love Thai food, that’s only if you don’t destroy Thailand. So I know how much you want you want to destroy Thailand and I understand I wanted to run away from home then my mom said you will never have Thai food again so I decided to come home and I felt a lot better after I think about it. I am glad I didn’t go so I would have no Thai food. So please alien king I would love it if my family and I would stay alive wouldn’t your mom be made if you destroyed a different place with out asking her so think twice about destroying Thailand?