GEDS-Tori

Dear Pen Pals, My name is Tori and my favorite sports are tennis,basketball, and softball.I enjoy Gymnastics too.Just so you know I'm a girl.Anyway,what's cool about me is that in about 10 seconds I can do the splits all the way to the ground.I also like to go shopping. But even though I like to shop for clothes doesn't mean I don't foccos on my school work. What I love about Maryland is the trees in the Spring. I have seen trees with beautiful pink and green, and white leaves. I also like the parks. Maryland has nice food thatyou would want to try, especialy the pizza. Also if you like to ride your bike Maryland closes the streets on Sunday. From,Tori

Tell the aleins a good story from earth or face annihilation!!!

Brainstorm: No planets to blow up if.... We're good anough because.... The cool sports we play are.... The delishes food we eat are.... If you destroy us what will happen is.... Don't do it because.... Think about what will happen if....

Rough Draft: Alenins, aleins, aleins, in the nices way I can say it... DON'T BLOW US UP! Because if you do other alenis that want to blow us up with in even bigger thing won't be able to because YOU already blew us up,and if other people blew us up (not other people related to you) with an even bigger thing they could take even MORE of us out.So please, don't you want other people to have a chance to blow us up to.Also their are delishes food that you could try like pizza, apple pie, blueberry pie, chocolate, EVERYTHING! Their are also sports that make you strong. Like soccer, football, basketball, jump rope, all kinds of sports, but if you blow us up YOU WON'T be able to eat all those good things, YOU WON'T be able to play all those great sports. Also if you don't think we're good anough than you will think ALL the planets are not good anough. So next time you want to blow up a planet THEIR WON'T BE ANY to blow up. So think about what will happen if you blow us up, think about it, think about it.

Second Draft: Alenins, aleins, aleins, in the nices way I can say it... DON'T BLOW US UP! Because if you do other alenis that want to blow us up with in even bigger weapon won't be able to because YOU already blew us up,and if other people blew us up (not other people related to you) with an even bigger weapon they could take even MORE of us out.So please, don't you want other people to have a chance to blow us up to.Also their are delishes food that you could try like pizza with all that sauce on it and freash graded cheese and freash parsleyand the crust that you had fun flipping your self,also apple pie is great because it has apples in it and sugar in in it, also if you put sugar on a nice juicy freash apples and a little bit of honey on it, it makes a great taste together, also it tastes so good if you put some whiped cream on it or some vanilla ice cream on it, it tastes super together. We also have blueberry pie which also has bluberrys in it and also goes good with honey in it,and chocolate deishes milk chocolate it melts in your mouth it's so delishes I can't even describe how good it is,we have cookies,pudding,vegatables EVERYTHING! You want it we have it. Their are also sports that make you strong. Like soccer which make your feet strong, football which make your armes and legs strong, basketball which make your armes and legs strong, jump rope makes your armes and legs strong, all kinds of sports in america help you to exersise, but if you blow us up YOU WON'T be able to eat all those good things, YOU WON'T be able to play all those great sports. Also if you don't think we're good anough than you will think ALL the planets are not good anough. So next time you want to blow up a planet THEIR WON'T BE ANY to blow up. So think about what will happen if you blow us up, think about it, think about it.