GEDS-Partha



Dear pen pals, I live in Maryland. What is it like in the big city? Well my name is Partha. I am 9 and a half and almost 10. I like reading comic books. I am jest asking do you like reading books? Now I am going to talk about Maryland. Do you knew that we have a state cat ! Do you like it where you live? Is it hot there ?IT is sometimes hot here. Well do you like your school? My school is cool, but I will be going to another school next year. I have 13 class friends. 6 are boys and 7 are girls and that equells 13 echsepes your teacher. Well got to say good - bye and hope to write to you again.

PARTHA

Tell the aliens a good story about earth or face annihilation!!!!!

Brainstorm: 1. My Aunt, Uncle and couin live here. 2. We have friends living here. 3. We have our God taking care of us. 4. We have space ships to go to the moon and check on you.Ha, Ha. 5. My dad's Aunt, Uncle live here and I DO NOT want them to die and that will be sad. 6.We could tell them to go to another planet and destroy that planet. 7.We have airports that people have to go and that is how they travel around to many places. 8. We have counteries that we people live in. 9. My couin in somewhere in the big world lives here and I DO NOT want her to die.

Rough Draft: Once a upon a time there was a world that was created by god. We have space ships to come up and check up on you. Ha, Ha! Up in space, aliens where planing to destroy the earth and they didn't know about god. They didn't even know that god was even taking care of us.They didn't even know that we have friends and family living here.We could tell them to go to another planet and destroy that planet. My dad's aunt and uncle live here and they have a swimming pool and I DO NOT want them to die.My Aunt, Uncle and cousin live here.We have countries that we people live in.We have airports that people have and that is how we tavel around.We can tell them to go to destroy another planet. The End

Second Draft: Once a upon a time there was a world that was created by god. We have space ships to come up and check up on you. Ha, Ha, Ha! Up in space, aliens where planing to destroy the earth and they didn't know about god. They didn't even know that god was even taking care of us. They didn't even know that we have friends and family living here.We could tell them to go to another planet and destroy that planet. My dad's aunt and uncle live here and they have a swimming pool and I DO NOT want them to die.My Aunt, Uncle and cousin live here.We have countries that we people live in.We have airports that people have and that is how we travel around.We can tell them to go to destroy another planet. Other people in the world have jobs in unouvrsities The End