isb--Caroline

One day in the U.S.A. a U.F.O. made a crop circle. Caroline's family including Super Girl came over to the U.F.O and one of the aliens came out of the U.F.O. and talked to Super Girl. They said that they were looking for there baby alien. So Caroline,Caroline's family, and Super Girl helped find there baby alien... and they found HIM the aliens were so happy.The aliens went back to purple planet. Caroline hoped they could come back again.

I think your story is terrific! I learned that you write a lot on a piece of paper it will become small on the computer.I learned that my audience is the world. I learned how to write

a story on the computer.