ISB_Liam

Hello my name is Liam. my birthday is August. my favorite food is Macon cheese. My favorite color is green. I like to watch the woody wood pecker show.

first draft: (not yet finished) Your majesty I am here to persuade you not to destroy Thailand because of three reasons I.S.B, friends and books. I am here to claim my reasons because you are planning to destroy Thailand into smithereens. My first reason is friends. I’ll give you a description of the meaning. A pal or someone you like to play and joke around with. If you destroy Thailand you will be destroying 61,000,000 people and innocent lives. You will destroy much more then you think. Reason one to persuade you not to destroy Thailand because of friends. At ISB I have friends. I like to play with my friends that go to ISB. When or if you will turn ISB into a smithereens YOU will kill or parish everyone at ISB. Did you know your majesty?

2nd draft( still not finished)

Liam Your majesty I am here to persuade you not to destroy Thailand because of three reasons ISB, friends and books. I am here to claim my reasons because you are planning to destroy Thailand into smithereens. My first reason is friends. I’ll give you a description of the meaning. A pal or someone you like to play and joke around with. If you destroy Thailand you will be destroying 61,000,000 people and innocent lives. You will destroy much more then you think.

Reason one to persuade you not to destroy Thailand because of friends. At ISB I have friends. I like to play with my friends that go to ISB. When or if you will turn ISB into a smithereens YOU will kill or parish everyone at ISB. Did you know your majesty 1,975 go to ISB? I say or all of us say DON’T DESTROY THIALAND. Here is another reason why you shouldn’t destroy our country Thailand.

Reason two, books will blow you away.

final draft (finished)

Liam Your majesty I am here to persuade you not to destroy Thailand because of three reasons: ISB, friends and books. I claim that my reasons for saving Thailand are exceptional. For these reasons you must change your plan to obliterate Thailand. My first reason is friends. I’ll give you a description of the meaning. A pal or someone you like to play and joke around with. If you destroy Thailand you will be destroying 61,000,000 people and innocent lives and some of them are my friends. Friends help you when you get hurt. Friends are caring and you can trust them. For this reason, you will be destroying much more then you think. Along with reason number one (friends) to persuade you not to destroy Thailand is reason number two,ISB. ISB is our school where we learn and play. At ISB I have friends. I like to play with my friends that go to ISB. Did you know your majesty ISB is a gigantic school? 1,975 students go to ISB. I say or all of us say DON’T DESTROY Thailand and our stunning school. For this reason you shouldn’t destroy our country Thailand. Finally, reason three, books are outrages, fantastic they will blow you away. The most important thing in school is to read! I couldn’t last a day without reading it is just the best thing around. Lastly guess how many books we check out in a year 56,123. So are you persuading now not to destroy Thailand because were just so interesting. Will you, will you destroy Thailand are beloved home.