KR+-+Gage+S

Hi my name is GAGE.I have 3 pet's their names are jack,tiger and radar.I have 2 dog's and 1 cat. My favourite book is Captain Underpants and the Wicked Wrath of the Wedgie Woman. My favourite sport is soccer. I'm really good at soccer. Every year my family and I go to Saint John, New Brunswick to visit my cousins.It is about a hour and half car ride.My second favorite //sport is hockey my fivoirte hockey team is calgary flames. My favorite person on the team is jarome iginla .It's the middle of the winter and the snow is mellting because spring is almost here. I can't wait.//

My brainstorm



cheif zen you should not distroey canada because canada is so beautiful and peacful. dont distreoy canada!

cheif zen hears my first reason why you should not destroy our nation. The rivers are crystal clear. The lakes are great to swim in, canoeing boating. My second reason is sports. Sports are the greatest thing in Canada and you get medels, trophys and you get in the newspaper. So don't destroy our beautiful nation. Please!!!!!!!!!!! My third reason is music. Music is great there is a whole bunch of music starts like AC/DC, Nickleback. There songs are the best. Music inspires people espesaely people that sing and do poetry. After all of that I hope you changed your mind. DON'T DESTROY CANADA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2nd draft

cheif zen you should not destroy canada because canada is so beautiful and peacful. dont destroy canada! cheif zen hears my first reason why you should not destroy our nation. The rivers are crystal clear. The lakes are great to swim in, canoeing boating. My second reason is sports. Sports are the greatest thing in Canada and you get medels, trophys and you get in the newspaper. So don't destroy our beautiful nation. Please!!!!!!!!!!! My third reason is music. Music is great there is a whole bunch of music starts like AC/DC, Nickleback. There songs are the best. Music inspires people espesaely people that sing and do poetry. After all of that I hope you changed your mind. DON'T DESTROY CANADA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Final Draft

Chief Zen you should not destroy Canada because Canada is so beautiful and peacful. dont destroy Canada!

Cheif Zen hears my first reason why you should not destroy our nation. The rivers are crystal clear. The lakes are great to swim in, canoeing boating.

My second reason is sports. Sports are the greatest thing in Canada and you get medels, trophys and you get in the newspaper. So don't destroy our beautiful nation. Please!!!!!!!!!!!

My third reason is music. Music is great there is a whole bunch of music starts like AC/DC, Nickleback. There songs are the best. Music inspires people espesaely people that sing and do poetry.

After all of that I hope you changed your mind. DON'T DESTROY CANADA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!