TC-Torben

Hello my name is Torben,I live in Papamoa,NZ. Papamoa is really good for going to the beach because Mount Maunganui is one of the best surfing spots in New Zealand and its just down the road from us. I have a surf board and I can easily stand up on it in fact I can diagonally surf along the top of the wave. I have two pets a cat and a dog the cat is called Maisy and the dog is Sabre, I love sports I play Soccer, Cricket,Water-polo and I go to Surf Life Saving Club and also I came third in the school Duathalon in the boys Year 5 this year.

 The Walk

Someone swore that there was a giant electric eel in the reserve by Gravatt Road in Papamoa because they saw a big light in the water at night when they were spearing eels. One day there was a normal school kid named Torben. It was two thirty on a Friday and Torben was packing his bag to bike home. After all the people in the bike bay left, he left, too. On the way home, he saw a glimpse of red in the Reserve, but he didn’t really worry about it. When he got home, His brother, Jack was on the computer,so Torben had some afternoon tea and then watched some T.V. After an hour he got bored of watching T.V so he decided to have a play on his skateboard with the kids on the street. When he got to the end of the drive, he could see Oliver and Jake playing on their skateboards. He just got onto the road and then his mum yells out “Torben, can you take Sabre for a walk? Oliver and Jake can come if you want.” “OK,” he says. After they get to the Reserve, Torbin could see that glimpse of red again. “Hey, Torben and Oliver look at this!” said Jake. “OH MY GOD! ” exclaimed Jake, “it’s a person!” “He’s dead! I can tell because he is floating on the waterways on his belly.” said Torben. “Come on you two, lets go and tell our parents.” stated Torben. “Come on Sabre!” whistled Torben. “Wait a minute, I think he can smell something.” said Oliver. “OK then, we will follow him.” said Jake “Wait, look at that weird circle in the sky! It’s moving fast and it’s coming straight at us.” yelled Oliver. “WATCH OUT!...” BOOM!. “Are you OK, Jake and Oliver?” asked Torben. “We are fine,” said Jake, “Come on quickly! Lets go and tell our parents!” Torben noticed that Sabre had run home scared. “Mum and Dad, its a big rock that came crashing out from the sky!” said Oliver. “Nonsense!” says his dad. “Its true! That’s why we are dirty.” said Jake. “NO!” his mum shouted. “Ok then. Guys, lets go and try my mum and dad.” said Jake. “Hi mum, can we show you what’s in the Reserve?” “Sorry, I’m doing some house work.” Jake’s mum replied. “Please!” said Jake. “NO WAY!” his mum exclaimed. “Let’s try mine.” says Torben. The boys run back down the path to Torben’s and ask. “NO!” was her response. “Ok then. lets go back to the Reserve to investigate and we’d better bring Sabre just in case.” stated Torben. Back at the Reserve: “What is it?” asked Jake. “I think it is a meteor!” said Oliver. “No its a spaceship” said Torben “no its a giant pine cone from the trees above” said Jake (slightly a door opens up) sshh says Torben,out came this tall red thing with tiny antennae (Jake faints) do you think we should go now Oliver Torben seys, right lets drag jake,wait what is that alien doing seys Torben,(Jake wakes up) “can you hear that squeaking noise he seys I think he’s trying to communicate with some thing ” seys Oliver, watch out he’s got a gun Sabre come back here” said Torben “quickly lets go and hide behind that big tree” says Jake Ok lets go said Torben. Ten minutes later Torben seys “look he’s got an army”,wait seys Jake “you know that electric eel that someone swore they saw that must have been that light of that spaceship “ yes and they must of killed that person. ”Look and focus” seys Oliver “I think we should go and try to beat him up because he’s dropped his gun and he doesn’t look like he’s going to pick it up again Ok lets go on 3, 1 2 3! go Jake give him a kick said Torben (Jake kicks the alien falls) holy shoot these things are softies come on whose going in first you will be famous if you go in first, but will you take the risk, I will said Torben me two me three I could hear behind me, Ok lets go. I can’t see them any where in here said Jake and it’s really hot, hey look there’s one Torben a little punch in the ribs said Oliver Ok,wait he’s got a gun stop and hide in that room, OH NO said Torben in that room there was a path leading up to a big chair and there was aliens on either side of the path and they all had guns,Torben realises that there is an human stuck to the chair he had a big long beard and was really skinny. To Be Continued