ISB_Carolina

My name is Carolina. I like to read books, my favorite series is Geronimo Stilton, my favorite book is Kenny and the Dragon. My favorite color is green. My favorite food is lasagna. I come from Brazil. My favorite fruit is apple. I love reading books, ridding bikes, and swimming. I have an older brother his name is Henrique. He is 13 years old. I'm 10 years old. I have a mother, father, and a brother living in Thailand, the rest of my family lives in Brazil or Israel. My favorite subject at school is math, and then reading. The book that I'm reading right now is called "Edward's eyes." I really like exploring new places in Thailand, like beaches, hotels. But i really like to travel around the world, and see new and different places. My favorite sport is Handball, I like almost every sport except golf. My favorite TV show is Drake and Josh, Sponge Bob, and Ben 10 Alien Force.



Save us or not save us?
 * My first draft:**

Your Highness, Why would you destroy such a caring, and lively place like Thailand? I think you should not destroy Thailand, because of all the magnificent reasons I have, (and others.) Your Majesty, here are the 3 magnificent reasons, that I found, so you would not destroy Thailand. Our families are who care about us. Caring is very important because if your friends and family didn’t care about you, you wouldn’t be here, you would have o money, no food to eat, no one to help you when you need them. Our friends also care about us, they care about us because we care about them, and we care about them because they play with us, and they are nice to us, and they are nice to us because we are nice to them. If people didn’t care about you, they are not your friend. Caring is like when you get hurt and somebody helps you, and make you feel better, if they are not your friends, they would just leave you suffering alone crying. Friends always make you happy; they are superb, magnificent, and wonderful people.

(It's my first draft, I didn't finished typing it)


 * My Second Draft**

Save us or not save us? Your Highness, why would you destroy such a lovely and friendly place like Thailand? I think you should not destroy Thailand because of all the magnificent reasons I have. Your Majesty, this are the 3 magnificent reasons why you should not destroy Thailand. First because of our friends that care about us. Caring is very important because if your family did not care about you, you wouldn’t be here, you would have no money, or you would have nothing to eat, because your parents are who works to get money, (because children are too small, and they don’t know a lot of things). Friends are also caring people. Your friends care about you because you play with them, and you are nice to them. You play with them because they care about each other, and you also care about them. If people don’t care about you that means that they are not your friend. Caring is like when you get hurt, if your friends are caring, they would help you get better, if they are not your friends, they would just let you sad and crying. Friends always makes you happy, they are superb, magnificent, and wonderful people “Family is like your friends” is the second reason. Whenever you see your family you will always be happy, just like when you see your friends. Families are like your friends because they made a decision to have you, (when you are born) and your friends made a decision to be your friends, and to play with you. They both made fascinating decisions. Family and friends are worthwhile, marvelous, and spectacular because they help you when you need them. They love you so much! It’s incredible how happy we are when we see them. Your Highness, why would you want to destroy about 70,000,000 families? Would you be happy with that? If you would be happy killing so many people, why don’t you kill your family? I’ve lost some people in my family, and I don’t want to lose anyone else. I think you would feel the same, wouldn’t you? “Friends” is my last magnificent reason why you should not destroy Thailand. When you want to play something, you would ask your friends, because they know the best things to play, and they play nicely with you. Friends are people that like you very much, friends are people that care about you, friends are people that helps you when you need them, friends are everything anyone would want to have. Mr. Alien king, if you had friends in Thailand, that you really liked, and you knew they would destroy Thailand, and your friends would die, you would feel very sad, and you would miss them a lot. About 70,000,000 lively people live in Thailand, would you like to destroy their friendship? Your Highness, I think you should start thinking about other people instead of yourself. Think about how they feel if you destroy our wonderful, gigantic, and incredible world. It would be a memorable world, if you don’t destroy Thailand. If you don’t destroy Thailand, we will provide you with marvelous friends and all the beautiful things and unique things we can give you, and you don’t have to give anything back, we don’t mind if we don’t receive anything, because you already gave us our marvelous world back. In conclusion I want to ask you a question, if you lived in Thailand and you had worked really hard to make a comfortable friendship, and Thailand would be destroyed, how would you feel? Would you like it? What will you gain by killing us? If you kill Thailand 70,000,000 people will die, and you have NO reason why you should kill us, so why don’t you just let us live our glorious life instead of killing us for nothing. By Carolina


 * Final Draft

Save us or not save us?** Your Highness, why would you destroy such a lovely and friendly place like Thailand? I think you should not destroy Thailand because of all the magnificent reasons I have. Your Majesty, this are the 3 magnificent reasons why you should not destroy Thailand. First of all, because of our friends which care about us. Caring is very important because if your family did not care about you, you wouldn’t be here, you would have no money, or you would have nothing to eat, because your parents that are the people who work to get money, (because children are too small, and they don’t know a lot of things). Friends are also caring people. Your friends care about you because you play with them, and you are nice to them. You play with them because they care about each other, and you also care about them. If people don’t care about you that means that they are not your friend. Caring is like when you get hurt, if your friends are caring, they would help you get better, if they are not your friends, they would just let you sad and crying. Friends always makes you happy, they are superb, magnificent, and wonderful people “Family is like your friends” is the secondreason. Whenever you see your family you will always be happy, just like when you see your friends. Families are like your friends because they made a decision to have you, (when you are born) and your friends made a decision to be your friends, and to play with you. They both made fascinating decisions. Family and friends are worthwhile, marvelous, and spectacular because they help you when you need them. They love you so much! It’s incredible how happy we are when we see them. I’ve lost some people in my family, and I don’t want to lose anyone else. I think you would feel the same, wouldn’t you? “Friends” is my last magnificent reason why you should not destroy Thailand. When you want to play something, you would ask your friends, because they know the best things to play, and they play nicely with you. Friends are people that like you very much, friends are people that care about you, friends are people that helps you when you need them, friends are everything anyone would want to have. Mr. Alien king, if you had friends in Thailand, that you really liked, and you knew they would destroy Thailand, and your friends would die, you would feel very sad, and you would miss them a lot. About 70,000,000 lively people live in Thailand, would you like to destroy their friendship? Would you be happy with that? Your Highness, I think you should start thinking about other people instead of yourself. Think about how they feel if you destroy our wonderful, gigantic, and incredible world. It would be a memorable world, if you don’t destroy Thailand. If you don’t destroy Thailand, we will provide you with marvelous friends and all the beautiful things and unique things we can give you, and you don’t have to give anything back, we don’t mind if we don’t receive anything, because you already gave us our marvelous world back. In conclusion I want to ask you a question, if you lived in Thailand and you had worked really hard to make a comfortable friendship, and Thailand would be destroyed, how would you feel? Would you like it? What will you gain by killing us? If you destroy.Thailand 70,000,000 people will die, and you have NO reason why you should kill us, so why don’t you just let us live our glorious life instead of killing us for nothing. By Carolin**a**