wes-will

Hi my name is will.I am 7 years old.I love video games.

MY MOM & DAD ARE NOT THEMSELVES Once Will and his dad and Lucy were playing basketball outside.Then Wills dad shot a basket he made it. When Will and Lucy (add space ) (his dog )saw it Will said"great shot dad" then Willl (Will) looked back ..... he was gone.Will and Lucy went inside because they were scared that they could not find their dad. They went down to his mom she said "I don't know where he went" Then she was gone too. Will and Lucy sat down and thought about a plan and we went upstairs. When Will and Lucy got to Wills room they saw a glowing light in Will's closet. When Will opened the door his mom and dad were standing there glowing in the dark. They told Will that they were both aliens. Will asked them "what planet are you from". They said "Jupiter". Will and Lucy asked if they could go back to Jupiter with them and the aliens said "yes". Will could not believe that his mom and dad were really aliens all the time.

That was a nice story, you didn't have a a lot problems ( You had two tiny little ones) but it was still ok. I think you are a pretty good writer. From Gal