KR+-+Aaron+H

Hi my name is Aaron. I am a boy in grade 4. I live in Keswick Ridge Canada. We read a Harry Potter book. We got sorted into houses.I have dark brown hair with blue eyes. I have lots of freckels. I like to play my nintendo [it is a game sistem]. My hair is straight and is short. I hope you get a picture in your head of what I look like. When I send you this note.

My Brainstorm



_second draft Cheif zen. Please don't destroy the lovely country of Canada.This country is green and very lovable.I will prove to you chef zen..I will try everything to save this country.

We get a lot of snow. It looks like a big white blanket or sparkeling diamonds.You can go skiing in the sparkeling snow.You can do lot's of stuff in that fluffy stuff.

Music is a very importent thing in Canada. It is incredible dancing to music. Step by step,holding hands it is all fun.

In the fall.The leafs turn beautiful colors.Like a rainbow on the ground.Then you can jump into them they go everywhere.

Captin as you can see Canada is a marvoulous country.I beg of you not to destroy the lush green country known as Canada.

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Cheif zen. Please don't destroy the lovely country of Canada.This country is green and very lovable.I will prove to you chef zen..I will try everything to save this country.

We get a lot of snow. It looks like a big white blanket or sparkeling diamonds.You can go skiing in the sparkeling snow.You can do lot's of stuff in that fluffy stuff.

Music is a very importent thing in Canada. It is incredible dancing to music. Step by step,holding hands it is all fun.

In the fall.The leafs turn beautiful colors.Like a rainbow on the ground.Then you can jump into them they go everywhere.

Captin as you can see Canada is a marvoulous country.I beg of you not to destroy the lush green country known as Canada.