MR_Dillan



I am Dillan, and I am a good student. I love sports and I am a fan of animals.My favorite sport is basketball. My favorite animal is a Tiger. My favorite subject is Math.

The Lost Kid Named Oran By: Dillan Peyton, Dillan, Oran were walking home from school on a hot day in Orlando, Florida. Oran said I need to tie my shoe but you guys can go ahead, but it took him so long to tie his shoe so Dillan turns around and Oran is gone. Dillan and Peyton looked around in trees and bushes but couldn’t find him.

Then they went and told Oran’s mom and dad but they thought we were playing Hide and go Seek. They went to the police and told them the story and they just laughed. The police didn’t believe them because they are kids.

So now they have to try to find Oran there selves. They looked for two days and no sign of Oran. It is going to take a few days but they know they will find Oran.

On Monday Dillan and Peyton walked home again and there was a truck sitting a crossed the street and they think it is the kidnapper. Next thing they hear someone is pounding on the back door and they think it is Oran. They hear a voice screaming HELP HELP HELP !!! They now know it is Oran.

The next day the truck is sitting there again. They make a run for it and the truck follows them. They hid behind a bush and the truck was gone. The next morning they see the truck. A window is open in the truck and they see Oran. When the guy in the truck looks away they run behind the truck. They carefully open the back doors and Oran comes out. We call the police and they get the kidnapper. The kidnappers name was Cameron. So now the three of them are never walking home from school again.

It is very interesting! But I think you could use more description in the story! Other than that this bit of the story is great!