TAISM4-Alvin+R.

==Hello my name is Alvin I am in grade4 I am from India and 9 years old. I have a few friends and I can tell you their names **Anwar,Cam and Alex.**These friends are really funny and invite me to their birthday party I also call them to my house and I go to their house to play in a few times well it is pretty fun because they have Lego Nintendo Wii and PSP and other video games. Well this my favorite thing about my life.==

Can you tell me about your life maybe if you don't know much then ask your mom or dad.
=ADVENTURES OF THE DANGEROUS KIDS first draft=

===There are two children one was June and the other one is July. They decided to go to the ship, then they crashed and then, they landed on a island which they didn't want to go. They went to a place where there were trees. They saw a house. There was a grandmother " Hi! " she said. "Come here, DIE! just kidding" The grandmother said. " Are you guys lost?" The grandmother asked. " Yes, Do you have a ship we can use? We need it. " June asked. " Yes, I do have a ship." the grandmother replied. They used put the boat on gear but before that July said "your coming with us because your alone. The grandma said"hppppppppp" "ok I will come" then they all lived happily ever after. THE END===

ADVENTURES OF THE DANGEROUS KIDS second draft
There are two children one was June and the other one is July. They decided to go to the ship, then they crashed and then They landed on a island which they did not want to go. They went to a place where there were trees. They saw a house. There was a grandmother she said hi come here DIE just kidding. Are you guys lost. Exactly Do you have a ship can we use it I need it. The grandma then said yes I do have a ship they used but before that July said "your coming with us because your alone. The grandma said"hppppppppp" "ok I will come" then they all lived happily ever after. THE END

P.S the grandma died after two years and the children had to beg on the road because they were poor.