KR+-+Hannah+P

Hi, my name is Hannah and I am eight years old. I have two brothers and their names are Austin and Seth, Austin is in grade ten but I don't know what grade Seth is in.My eyes are light blue and I have long light brown hair.I have freckles over my cheeks and nose.My birthday is July 11th. It is the end of winter here at Keswick Ridge, the snow is melting quickly and getting warmer.

My Brainstorm



Cheif Zen I ask you to please not destroy the marvoles peice of land which we call Canada.My name is Hannah and I will give you three extreamly good reasons why not to not make Canada a country.

Now, Cheif Zen close your eyes and I will persuade you to not destroy our gorgeous land, Canada.Canada has all four seosons.In the winter the sun shines on the snow then glitters it'll make you glance all day at it.Summer gives you a chance to explore the woods and do different activities.Fall has all different color leaves falling from the trees.Spring has the snow melting into graet big puddles of water!

My last reason is that we get to choose who our goverment is.Our country has a democratic society.If our goverment isn' t doing a good job we get to throw them out.This type pf society has freedom to do whatever we want!

Now Cheif Zen I think you should think about my reasons and don't blow up Canada. ____________________________________________________

My second draft.

Cheif Zen I ask you to please not destroy the marvoles peice of land which we call Canada.My name is Hannah and I will give you three extreamly good reasons why not to not make Canada a country.

Now, Cheif Zen close your eyes and I will persuade you to not destroy our gorgeous land, Canada.Canada has all four seosons.In the winter the sun shines on the snow then glitters it'll make you glance all day at it.Summer gives you a chance to explore the woods and do different activities.Fall has all different color leaves falling from the trees.Spring has the snow melting into graet big puddles of water!

My last reason is that we get to choose who our goverment is.Our country has a democratic society.If our goverment isn' t doing a good job we get to throw them out.This type pf society has freedom to do whatever we want!

Now Cheif Zen I think you should think about my reasons and don't blow up Canada. _______________________________________________________________________

Final Copy

Cheif Zen I ask you to please not destroy the marvoles peice of land which we call Canada.My name is Hannah and I will give you three extreamly good reasons why not to not make Canada a country.

Now, Cheif Zen close your eyes and I will persuade you to not destroy our gorgeous land, Canada.Canada has all four seosons.In the winter the sun shines on the snow then glitters it'll make you glance all day at it.Summer gives you a chance to explore the woods and do different activities.Fall has all different color leaves falling from the trees.Spring has the snow melting into graet big puddles of water!

My last reason is that we get to choose who our goverment is.Our country has a democratic society.If our goverment isn' t doing a good job we get to throw them out.This type pf society has freedom to do whatever we want! YAY.

Now Cheif Zen I think you should think about my reasons and don't blow up Canada.