MR_Derek

Hello my name is Derek. My favorite subject in school is Science. I love to skateboard and draw. Also I love animals I have a tortoise, cat, dog, rat, and we also have a fish pond with fish. My favorite music is rock, metal, and death metal. Another thing about me is that I love to express my self so i have earings. I like a lot of books but my favorite is Harry Potter so far I have read the 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 6th, and 7th. I hope im not annoying you but I have one more thing to say I also love to hang out with my friends and go outside.

Where’s The Skate Park??

CRASH!!! “Oww I scrapped my knee!” yelled a 12 year old with long hair, brown eyes, and is normal for his size. “Hey Jamie” called his friend Timmy. “I heard that a new skate park opened and we got to go!” Timmy yelled. Timmy is pretty chubby and has short hair and is shorter than me. “I cant I got to come home” I groaned. “Hey maybe we can go later” said Timmy.

I hopped on my skateboard and skated away. A skate board is a long piece of wood shaped in a certain way, there is metal to hold the wheels called trucks, and grip tape on the top. The cracks in the side walk made a thump when I passed them. I Ollied into my drive way. An Ollie is when you pop your skateboard then slide your foot up and then go in the air and land.

I picked my skateboard up and went in my house. I put my skateboard on the cold stone in my basement. Then I ran upstairs to see that dinner was made. So I ate my mashed potatoes and pork. “Jamie is that you!” yelled a 31 year old lady with sandy hair, and brown eyes known as my mom.

“Yes mom I just got back from skateboarding” I finished my food washed my plate and went to my room. CREAK! CRACK! SQUEK! Went the stairs, as I stepped on them. I laid on my bed and watched television for about 30 minutes. I turned off the TV went down stairs then told my mom I was going to the new skate park with Timmy.

I skated and heard the thumps again until I got to Timmy’s house. DING!!! DONG!!! Went Timmy’s doorbell. Then Timmy opened the door and I told him to get his skateboard and go to the skate park. We were taking a short cut through the woods when Eric showed up. Have you ever had a friend that you don’t really like but he’s still your friend? Well Eric is just like that.

Eric has glasses, short rough hair, he always has stripe shirts, and is so annoying. “Hey guys” he said in a goofy way. “I brought my skateboard with me so let’s go to the skate park” Eric said. “Fine! Follow me gosh!” So we walked through the woods for five minutes when I was sort of lost. “Jamie are we going the right way?” asked Timmy.

“Yea were almost there” I lied. Another five minutes pasted and I realized we were lost. “Were lost!!!!” I admitted. GRRRR! “What was that” I whispered. All of a sudden a dog popped out of no were. The dog started drooling. “AHHHHHHH!!” we all screamed. “That’s not a dog it’s a werewolf!” I cried. All of a sudden the werewolf attacked with all his might.

He was tearing up my shirt, tearing open my skin, and scratching my skateboard. I got an idea I blocked the werewolf with my skate board. Than I walked away and the werewolf didn’t even no I was leaving, he was paying attention to my skate board. We- ran faster than a speeding bullet when all of a sudden I tripped on a stick and fell down in a hole. What can happen now I thought? Then I heard a stick crack! Then…. a spray of fire flew across the walls and I got burned a little. “What the” I said. ROARRRRRRRRRR!!! I flew across the tunnel and hit a wet stone wall from the roar. “How the heck did we get in this?” I screamed.

I saw a dragon with a chain on its foot stomping into the light. “Timmy!!” I screamed “find a rope”. It took 20 seconds when Timmy came with a vine. “Grab this” he yelled. When I grabbed it and the vine tied around my arms! “Timmy just pull” I yelled.

Timmy pulled with all his might and the dragon bit my foot! I was wriggling around and he would not let go. Timmy pulled with all his might and I got me out of that hole. “Thanks Timmy lets get out of here” I said. We ran in a random direction then we found a hill and went walked up a dirt trail.

“YES!!!” I yelled “were here!” I just sat on the ground and watched everyone skate. Then we all suddenly froze right when a cold blue light was beaming on us. We were still frozen and we got lifted up! We were going in a saucer!

Then I woke up with cold sweat on my face. “It was just a dream” I thought. Then I saw a flash of green light that almost blinded me and a saucer flew bye in the sky. “So it was real?” I asked myself. I fell back asleep then I woke up. Later on me, Timmy, Eric finally went to the skate park and had a blast. Timmy and I were saying that we had the same dream!

After about an hour we decided to have some fun. So we decided to go to this broken down house that is said to be haunted. So are group walked on the hot sticky tar until we found this house with broken windows, cracked wood, and the roof has holes in it. “Let’s go” I said. We walked in the house and I almost fell in the floor boards. “OOO!” something howled. “IM GETTING OUT OF HERE!” yelled Eric. He ran to the door and tried opening it. It was locked!!!!

All of a sudden there was green writing on the wall. “ GET OUT GET OUT ” CRASH!!! The vase just fell! “AHHHHH!!!” I yelled. It was a dream again? Forget it I am going to bed. I finally got a nice sleep and I still seen another saucer?!?!?

 That was great I liked the way your story was full of action. Q.Is there actually a broken down house that is said to be haunted.