ISB_Tanya

=Hi my name is Tanya. I am from Thailand, my favorite food is Japanese food. I like most of the color. I am ten years old, and what I mostly do at home is watch T.V and play board games. I really like to go to beaches and go to see pretty coral and fishes.One of my favorite fruits are juicy strawberry, and I don't like to eat cherry.= = = ==

Dear Alien king, You shouldn’t destroy Thailand, because this country is full of love. It’s love from your parents. When your parents tuck you to bed you could feel there love coming. It’s very comfortable that you could their gigantic love. It’s very first class.

It’s very amazing that your parents would work extra hard than they did than they did because of you. They have to buy more stuff and use more money because of you. Parents buy you clothing like jackets. Jackets are clothing that keeps you warm from the cold. Parents buy you a comfortable bed so you could have a good sleep.

When you are sick they take you to the doctor because they love you and they want you to feel better. Being sick is like not feeling well. The doctor would give you medicine, which cost money. Medicine helps you feel better. Some medicines are breath taking but parents still buy them for you so for you would feel better.

Parents buy you toys. Toys are mostly made out of plastic. Sometimes parents say, “it’s worth a while to pay you to good school and learn.” Kids like me go to school parents has to pay money for you to go to school.

Mostly parents take you to different places around the world every year. They take you to marvelous places like parks and beaches. On that time your highness the school is closed so you won’t miss school. Kids like us likes to go on vacation a lot. But we can’t go on vacations every week because; going on vacation use a lot of money you have to pay for hotels, food, airplane tickets, car rentals. But mostly my parents take me to beaches.

Your highness please don’t destroy Thailand do you see the love parents give their child. Tuck their child to bed at night, paying money so we can go to school. Having you go to the doctor when you are sick, buying toys for you so you won’t be lonesome. Taking you to different places around the world and fun places. All of those are stuff parents does do and they do it because they love you.

Second draft Dear Alien King,Dear Alien king, You shouldn’t destroy Thailand, because this country is full of love. It’s love from your parents.parent! When your parents tuck you to bed you could feel there strong love coming. It’s very comfortable that you could feel their gigantic love. It’s very first class.

It’s very amazing that your parents would work a lotextra harder than they did than they did because of you. They have to buy more stuff and use more money because of you. Parents buy you clothing like jackets. Jackets are clothing that keeps you warm from the coldness. Parents buy you a comfortable bed so you could have a good sleep. All of the stuff that our parents buy used money.

When you are sick they take you to the doctor because they love you and they want you to feel better. Being sick is like not feeling well. The doctor would give you medicine, which cost money. Medicine helps you feel better. Some medicines are very expensivebreath taking but your parents still buys them for you so for you would feel better. Some medicine are dangerous and only doctors can assign them for you.

Parents buy you toys so you won’t be lonesome when you’re at home. Alien king if you don’t know what toys are these are I’m going to describe it to you. TToys are mostly made out of plastic and it is fun to play with. Sometimes parents say, “it’s worth a while to pay you to good school and learn.” Kids like me go to school parents has to pay money for you to go to school.

Mostly parents take you to different places around the world every year. They take you to marvelous places like parks and beaches. These are my favorites places my parents take me to, Disneyland in Japan and Disney world in America and I like to go to Universal studio in America my parents mostly take me to beaches in Thailand. On that time your highness the school is closed so you won’t miss school. Kids like us likes to go on vacation a lot. But we can’t go on vacations every week becausebecause;; going on vacation use a lot of money you have to pay for hotels, food, airplane tickets, car rentals. But mostly my parents take me to beaches.

Your highness please don’t destroy Thailand do you see the love parents give their child. Tuck their childtheir child to bed at night, paying money so we can go to school. Having you go to the doctor when you are sick, buying toys for you so you won’t be lonesome and buying needs and. wants. Taking you to different and fun places, around he worldplaces around the world and fun places. All of theose are stuff parents do and and they do it because they love you.

Final draft Dear Alien King You shouldn’t destroy Thailand, because this country is full of love. It’s love from your parents. When your parents tuck children to bed you could feel strong love coming. It’s very comfortable that you could feel their gigantic love.

It’s very amazing that parents would work a lot harder than they did than they did because of us. They have to buy more stuff and use more money because of children. Parents buy you clothing like jackets. Jackets are clothing that keeps you warm from the cold air. Parents buy comfortable beds so you could have a good sleep. All of the stuff that our parents buy was paid with money.

When kids are sick they take them to the doctor because they love you them and they want their child to feel better. Being sick is like not feeling well. The doctor would give them medicine, which cost money. Medicine helps them feel better. Some medicines are very expensive but parents still buy them for their children they would feel better. Some medicines are dangerous and only doctors can assign them for kids.

Parents buy them toys so they won’t be lonesome when you’re at home. Alien king if you don’t know what toys are I’m going to describe what they are. Toys are mostly made out of plastic and it is fun to play with. Sometimes parents say, “it’s worthwhile to pay kids to good schooling and, do a lot of stuff like try and read a harder level books. Kids like me go to a good school for parents have to pay a lot of money for you to go to school. Mostly parents take kids to different places around the world every year. They take them to marvelous places like parks and beaches. These are my favorites places my parents take me to, Disneyland in Japan and Disney world in America and I like to go to Universal studio in America my parents mostly take me to beaches in Thailand. On that time your highness the school is closed so you won’t miss school. Kids like us likes to go on vacation a lot. But we can’t go on vacations every week because going on vacation use a lot of money you have to pay for hotel rentals, food, sometime airplane tickets and car rentals. But mostly my parents take me to beaches.

Your highness please don’t destroy Thailand do you see the love parents give their child. Tuck their child their child to bed at night, paying money so we can go to school. Having you go to the doctor when you are they are sick; buying toys for you so you won’t be lonesome and buying needs. and. wants. Taking you to different and fun places, around he places world places around the world and fun places. All of those are stuff parents do and they do it because they love you.