KR+-+Justin+C

Hi my name is Justin, I am a boy and my hair is brown. I have a few freckles on my nose. I have 3 brothers and two parents. I am 8 years old and my birthday is July 24th. My favourite sport is soccer. In the winter I play hockey and I am on the Keswick Valley Stars. I love sweet potatoes and sweet potato fries. Next week I am going to Cuba with my family. We are going for a week. ___

Second draft

Don't blow up our country Chief Zen because we live here and people here don't want to hurt you. Canadians are very nice people and come and see for yourself. Listen to this story and I might be able to change your mind.

You don't want to blow up our country because we have good sports that will keep us fit and healthy. The sports entertain us in arenas and fields and gyms. We have soccer, which is a game where there are two nets and two teams and one soccer ball. Each team is trying to get the ball into the other teams net. Another sport is baseball. What you do with that is someone will throw the ball to you and you try to hit it with a bat. A bat is long round piece of wood. There are 4 bases and if you hit the ball far enough you can run around the four bases and you get a point. There are lots more sports to play. If you come to our country we will give you a seasons pass to the Toronto Blue Jays baseball games.

Next, reason for not blowing up our country is we have great music. We have the freedom to listen and create any music we want. It is very entertaining. You lison to it at special events like birthdays. We have lots of difrint types of music like jazz, rap, and rock. It can make you happy, sad, or mad. Come to your country, there is lots of music for you to listen to.

In Canada we grow lots of difrint foods in each season. In summer we grow strawberries, blueberries and raspberries. In fall we eat apples, brockley, sweet potatoes, and potatoes. In winter we can get oranges from other countries. In spring we can get maple syrup from the trees. Chief Zen we have lots of flowers in each season. You should come and see.

Chief Zen I think I think I have the best country in the world. I think I have proved my point. You should not blow up any countries because they have lots of stuff that is good too.

- Final Draft

Don't blow up our fabulous country Chief Zen because we live here and people here don't want to hurt you. Canadians are very peaceful people and come and see for yourself. Listen to this story and I might be able to change your mind.

You don't want to blow up our country because we have good sports that will keep us fit and healthy. The sports entertain us in arenas and fields and gyms. We have soccer, which is a game where there are two nets and two teams and one soccer ball. Each team is trying to get the ball into the other teams net. Another sport is baseball. What you do with that is someone will throw the ball to you and you try to hit it with a bat. A bat is long round piece of wood. There are 4 bases and if you hit the ball far enough you can run around the four bases and you get a point. There are lots more sports to play. If you come to our country we will give you a seasons pass to the Toronto Blue Jays baseball games.

Next, reason for not blowing up our country is we have great music. We have the freedom to listen and create any music we want. It is very entertaining. You lison to it at special events like birthdays. We have lots of difrint types of music like jazz, rap, and rock. It can make you happy, sad, or mad. Come to your country, there is lots of music for you to listen to.

In Canada we grow lots of difrint foods in each season. In summer we grow strawberries, blueberries and raspberries. In fall we eat apples, brockley, sweet potatoes, and potatoes. In winter we can get oranges from other countries. In spring we can get maple syrup from the trees. Chief Zen we have lots of flowers in each season. You should come and see.

Chief Zen I think I think I have the best country in the world. I think I have proved my point. You should not blow up any countries because they have lots of stuff that is good too.