GEDS-Nathan

Hello Pen Pals, My name is Nathan.I am 9 years old and in third grade.I love to play sports like basketball football and soccer.I also like to read and have fun with friends. What is cool about me is that I got a black belt less than three years.Another cool thing about me is that both my grandads fought against fascist Italy. What is cool about Maryland is that it's a fun place to be. And we have cool stuff here just like you guys. From Nathan

Tell the aliens a good story about earth or face annihilation!!!!

Brainstorm: We could tell them the history of earth. We can tell them there sort of famous here. We could tell them stories they might like to hear. Tell them about presidents. Tell them the old times. tell them about famous people. We could tell them what we do. Another thing is we can tell them what we do. We are busy just as you go destroy planets.We could show them what we eat.

Rough Draft: It all starts when every one is just doing nothing when all of a sudden aliens came to invade!!!! we had a huge fight and we won. But when we put the aliens in jail they escaped and sent their mind control gorillas after us. They destroyed the Army and etc. "all right we give up." said the president."Good"said the commander of the aliens. "Wait!" said one kid. "Mabye if we tell you about earth will you let us live". The aliens agreed "after all how bad can they be" said a alien. After the tour and so the aliens were ready to leave then suddenly a alien with huge eyes saw mars exploded.So the aliens. lived until they find a new home. They found a new home to live on Pluto as so it would be good? there would be one to find out. To go to pluto.THE END.......

Second Draft: It all starts when every one is just doing nothing when all of a sudden aliens came to invade!!!! we had a huge fight and we won. But when we put the aliens in jail they escaped and sent their crazy mind control gorillas after us. They destroyed the Army and etc. "all right we give up." said the president."Good know we will destroy you all!"said the commander and chief of the aliens. "Wait! just one second alien said one brave kid . "Mabye if we tell you about earth will you let us live". The aliens agreed "after all how bad can they be maybe we should have a tour" said a alien. After the tour and so the aliens were ready to leave then suddenly a fat dirty alien alien with huge eyes saw mars exploded.So the aliens. lived until they find a new home to live They found a new home to live on Pluto sort of like mars they said as so it would be good to live there? there would be one to find out. To go to pluto the unknown planet .THE END.......