ISB_Mariana

Hello my name is Mariana and I am 10 years old and I am from Brazil but I live in Thailand with my mom my dad and my sister. My favorite color is pink I speak Portuguese and my birthday is in October and I study in ISB(International school of Bangkok) my favorite food is Lasagna and my favorite drink is Coca-Cola. My favorite book is A Turma da Monica Joven. I like dancing and I like Ice Skating. My favorite subjects are music and art.

This is my first draft:

Dear alien king, I am writing these paragraphs because I want to describe to you my opinion of one place in Thailand that is very important and that place is ISB. ISB is big enough for about 2,000 kids. The school has a lot of grades at each level, for example the 4th grade has 6 sections. ISB has teachers to teach about 20 kids per class with one assistant in each class and ISB has a lot of class rooms for all the kids and teen-ager (there are 55 class rooms in the elementary school.

ISB has people from different countries. In my class there are kids from 12 different countries, teachers from different cities and countries like Canada, America, Australia and more. ISB teach different languages like Spanish, English, Chinese and Thai.

In ISB teachers teach a lot of splendid sports (sports are a way to exercise). ISB teach a lot of sports that use balls. Many people here in ISB like to play sports and ISB make many competitions of many sports…ISB is amazing! ! !

This is my second draft Dear alien king, I am writing these paragraphs because I want to describe to you my opinion of one place in Thailand that is very important and that place is ISB.(International School Bangkok) ISB is big enough for about 2,000 kids. ISB has a lot of grades at each level, for example the 4th grade has 6 sections. ISB has teachers to teach about 20 kids per class with one assistant in each class and ISB has a lot of classrooms for all the kids and teen-ager (there are 55 class rooms in the elementary school.)

ISB has people from different countries. In my class there are kids from 12 different countries, teachers from different cities and countries like Canada, America, Australia and more. ISB teaches different languages like Spanish, English, Chinese and Thai.

In ISB generous teachers teach a lot of splendid sports (sports are a way to exercise). ISB teaches a lot of sports that with. Many people here in ISB like to play sports and ISB make many competitions of many sports with other school and … lastly… ISB is amazing! ! ! Sincerely. Mariana

This is my final draft

Dear alien king, I am writing these paragraphs because I want to describe to you my opinion of one place in Thailand that is very important and that place is ISB.(International School Bangkok) ISB is big enough for about 2,000 kids and teen-ages. ISB has a lot of grades at each level, for example the 4th grade has 6 sections. ISB has teachers to teach about 20 kids per class with one assistant in each class and ISB has a lot of classrooms for all the kids and teen-ager (there are 55 class rooms in the elementary school.)

ISB has people from different countries. In my class there are kids from 12 different countries, teachers from different cities and countries like Canada, America, Australia and more. ISB teaches different languages like Spanish, English, Chinese and Thai.

In ISB generous teachers teach a lot of splendid sports (sports are a way to exercise). ISB teaches a lot of sports that with. Many people here in ISB like to play sports and ISB make many competitions of many sports against other school and … lastly… ISB is amazing! ! ! Sincerely. Mariana A student that Study in ISB.