MR_Danek_CodyW

My name is Cody W. I like to ride dirt bikes. My favorite sport is baseball because I've been playing it my whole life and I want to keep on playing it. I like to go to school and do science. My favorite thing to do at school is hang out with my friends and play kickball. My friends names are Luke, Danek, Cody B, Eddie, and Derek. There are a lot more. Our teacher loves inscects like cockroaches, spiders, and millipedes. She also loves butterflies.

My name is Danek. I also like to ride dirt bikes. My favorite sport is motocross and basketball. In school, my favorite subject is Math because I'm good at it. My favorite thing to do at school is eat lunch (of course), gym, and go out for recess. My friends are Eddie, Luke, Cody W, Bryan, Derek, Jake, Jacob, and Riley. At home, I like to watch T.V and play outside. My favorite thing to watch is Supercross. Supercross is professional dirt bike riders racing indoor motocross. That is me. Our teacher is kind of weird.

“Please, Alien King, don’t destroy us!” pleaded the peasants. “Fine. I will let you live as long as you convince me that humans are decent people and are worth not destroying.” “We will, Sir.” And their story went like this:

Once upon a time, in a land far, far away, there lived two boys. Cody and Danek. It was the year 1945. They went to downtown Toy-City. They were looking for controllers. They had found the controllers. They got batteries for it. Two AA’s. While they were at the register, they were captured by a net. “Oh my gosh,” yelped Cody. They yanked at the net.

They were brought into an old and disguised RV. They’ve been captured by soldiers! The soldiers asked, “Where are the controllers?” Danek and Cody replied, “We dropped them when you netted us!” They knew that they were in trouble, so they pulled out their light-sabers.

They told the soldiers that if they could cut sheet metal with their hands that they had to let them go. For free! The soldiers agreed. The soldiers pulled a piece of sheet metal. He held it out in front of him. Cody pulled out his light saber and then he “accidentally” slammed the unbalanced soldier with it!

Him and Danek fled the scene and ran for safety. They hid in the brush next to the toy store. They could here the soldiers yelping in pain. They chuckled amongst themselves in the brush. The soldiers spotted them in the brush. He started to run at them like he was going to chuck them into another zip code. Danek and Cody dived to the side to avoid danger. Then Cody and Danek said,” We are AWESOME!” “No, you are not “awesome”, replied the soldiers. Then, the soldiers chased us around the toy-store. Cody and Danek hid in one of the “employee only” closets.

Before they went in there, they set a trap to capture the soldiers. The soldiers heard them making the trap. The soldiers ran at them. Cody and Danek then hid in the closet. The soldiers ran right through the trap. Nothing happened! It was a dud. They forgot, they had to hook up the controller to the net to activate it. Cody and Danek ran for the door. They sprinted outside into the parking lot. They hopped into a clean, smooth Lamborghini and headed for home. The Lamborghini was as speedy as a dragster.

When they were about four blocks away from their house, they got pulled over by a police car. The policemen hopped out of the car. The two policemen walked over to the stolen Lamborghini. They saw that the “cops” were really the soldiers! Cody hopped on the pedal and went from 0-90 in about 5 seconds. Danek wasn’t wearing his seatbelt, and he got shaken around in the back seat.

Cody and Danek were so scared, that they dropped a brick on the pedal and headed home. They got to their house and hid under their beds. They heard the two soldiers stomp into their house. The first one went for Danek. The soldier was too strong. The soldier had taken Danek! Then, the second soldier went for Cody. Cody tried to push the soldiers away. The soldier had cat-like reflexes and grabbed Cody also!

Cody was screaming for help. He was doing everything he could to get away. He was kicking and screaming like a maniac. Danek pulled out his cell phone to call 911. He asked Cody, “Quick, what’s the number for 911!” “I don’t know,” said Cody. “I didn’t take that class!” Then Danek said, “Oh, I remember it now. I think it’s 211!” Danek typed in 211. The phone said, “I’m sorry. Your call cannot be completed.” Cody broke free of the soldiers grasp. He ran to where his mom worked and told her that soldiers were taking over their house.

“They are taking over our house!” “Well,” replied his mom, “did you call 911?” “Of course I did. I specifically dialed 211. Oh, whoops.” They called the “real” 911 and told the police that evil soldiers are taking over the world. Of course the cops didn’t believe them and thought that they were crazy. Then they went to the cops station then the mom told them what happened  and they believed them. Then Cody knew where they were going to go.

They went home and they found Danek beaten up and tied to a tree using chains. They found out that, after they untied him, he had a broken ribcage and a bruised up leg. The cops went looking for the soldiers. They found them half a mile away from the house. The cops arrested them and took them to the slammer. They were sentenced to life in prison.

“So, are you going to kill us, almighty Alien King?” asked Cody and Danek. The alien king scratched his head while he was thinking. “Yes, we are going to kill you!” replied the alien king. “Seriously?” “Nope, I’m just messing you! You’re free to go.” “Dude, you scared the heck out of us!” exclaimed Danek.

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 * Q: Who is Alien king. **  