ISB_Phakorn

Hi! My name is Phakorn. I am 10 years old.I am born in July.I come from Thailand. I love to watch T.V. and love to play computer games. I am in fourth grade and I have many friends but only 1 best friend. My best friend is named Jae-Hyung. I go to ISB. My favorite subject in school is P.E. and Art. My favorite book is The New Prophecy Warriors: Sunset. My favorite drink is Coca Cola. I love soccer and cricket. My favorite food is pizza.

My First Draft

Destruction to Thailand or no Destruction Dear You’re Majesty, Please don’t destroy Thailand. There are more than 61 million people living in Thailand. My opinion is that you shouldn’t destroy Thailand until you see what we will do. Many people have just been born and now they are going to die? People in Thailand love their country a lot. We always share things with each other. So please don’t destroy us.

My family loves each other a lot. They are with me night and day. Our family takes us to places we have never been to before. My family read to me at night. Our parents tell us stories we have never heard.

We stay together as a family. We go to different places together. Our parents are with us every morning. My brothers and me go with our parents to countries we have never been to. We have a brother and sister who sleep with us every night.

We bring them to the hospital when they are sick or hurt. When they fall and hurt themselves, we lift them up and carry them home. We take care of them. We try never to let them fall. We stay with them at the hospital if they have to.

My Final Draft

Destruction to Thailand or no Destruction Dear You’re Majesty,

Please Alien king, don’t destroy Thailand. It is a fascinating country since there are more than 61 million people living in Thailand and all the flowers are really dazzling and marvelous. My opinion is that you shouldn’t destroy Thailand until you see what we will do. Many people have just been born and now they are going to have to face death? I can’t believe it. People in Thailand love their country a lot. We often share things with each other. So please don’t destroy Thailand.

My family loves each other a lot. They are with me night and day. Our family takes me to places we have never experienced before. My family reads to me at night. Our parents tell us stories we have never heard.

We live together as a family. We go to different places together. Our parents are with us every morning. My brothers and me go with our parents to countries we have never been to. I have a brother and sister who sleep with me every night.

We take them to the hospital when one of us are sick or hurt. When they fall and hurt themselves, we lift them up and carry them home. We always take care of our family. We try never to let them fall. We stay with them at the hospital if they have to. So you won’t destroy Thailand. Right?

So if you don’t destroy I will bow to you many times. It will be the best day of my life. I will thank you a lot. We will entertain you everyday. So please don’t destroy Thailand.

By Phakorn