HC-Elektra

G’day from Australia. My name is Elektra. My friends call me leky. I am 11 years old. I am in grade 5. We got laptops this year(they are so cool). I was born in Australia and still living here, I really love it here. I go to Hawkesdale P-12 college, it is the best school. I love playing my Nintendo D.S and other games. ^_ ^ Goodbye

Whip! Hero fisherman just tied jelly fish man to a pole. “Who have we got now hero fisherman” said the police officer. “Jellyfish man officer” said hero fisherman. “Thank you” said the police officer. When hero fisherman got home he put on his bathers and went to the beach. Just as he was getting in the water sucker-man (a half man half octopus monster) jumped out at him. “You will never catch me” said hero fisherman. “We’ll see about that” said sucker-man as he wrapped his arm around a steal pole. Sucker-man swung the metal pole at him, hero fisher man ducked. “you missed””said hero fisherman laughing.
 * first draft**

My Story

Whip! Hero fisherman just tied jelly fish man to a pole. “Who have we got now hero fisherman” said the police officer. “Jellyfish man officer” said hero Fisherman. “Thank you” said the police officer.

When hero Fisherman got home he put on his bathers and went to the beach. Just as he was getting in the water sucker-man ,a half man half octopus monster, jumped out at him. “You will never catch me” said hero Fisherman. “We’ll see about that” said Sucker-man as he wrapped his arm around a steel pole. Sucker-man swung the metal pole at him. Hero Fisherman ducked. “You missed “said hero Fisherman laughing. Hero Fisherman grabbed his towel and put it over Sucker-man’s head and kicked him to the ground. He picked up his mobile phone and called the police. “I got sucker-man officer “said hero fisherman. “Great work” said the police officer.

“I’ll get you hero fisherman”yelled sucker-man from the back of the police car. “I don’t think so” Said hero fisherman. The end.