GEDS-KennedyL

Dear Pen Pals,

My name is Kennedy. I live in Maryland. What's cool about Maryland is that my school is here. What's cool about me is that I like Diary of a Wimpy Kid also. Also your talking to a girl who's in third grade. I have no brothers or sisters [But I hope I get one]. if I got a girl her nick name her Kayla if i got a boy his nick name him Lamarr. I also don 't have a cat or a dog .My number 1 color is blue. My number 1 sport is Basketball. I LOVE Nickl and Disney channel.

I wish we could see each other in person.

from your friend Kennedy,

Tell the Aliens a good story about earth or face annihilation!!!!

Brainstorm:

maybe we could tell them about God instead of there gods. Or we could tell them about our food and or football,basketball,tennis,or baseball games. We could tell them about Monsters vs Aliens. our houses. and concerts and events. We could tell them about pets. Or cars instead of Space ships. our states instead of planets. Also about electronics and offices. Friends and family. Maybe Presidents Vice presidents and the governments. And MONEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. And schools. park swimming pools camps. Also you can breathe on planet EARTH. We have clothes.

rough draft

Once upon a time there were Aliens about to destroy EARTH! But maybe I could tell the good things about earth to change there minds. So the Alien where here everybody was scared and the president couldn't do ANYTHING.Exept these 3 friends.The girl said are you shore you want to destroy our planet and why!No offense but you guys have BIG HEADS ! the little boy added but we have good things on earth like sports and snacks.We also don't live on planet MARS.So the Alien got scared and went to there planet to talk about what there going to do .So they came back.So now it looks like the Aliens vs humans. So they both came up with a plan. The Aliens plan was to destroy earth. The humans plan was to tell them good things about earth.So they met in the morning so the little girl said GAME ON! the humans first started off with there only weapon which was to tell them good things about earth. Like MONEY so they said that there was a thousand dollar bill [which there isn't] then the Aliens where about to destroy our planet like I said a long time ago. Then A MINUTE LATER. The earth started to shake THUMP THUMP THUMP. The aliens forgot they built a bigger ALIEN! named BOB wait just bob yes just bob why would they name someone just bob isn't it supposed to be scary. Well I didn't have time for detail okay. Anyway so there was bob but there was something different about bob we found out he was just a little clown doll. So the little boy said you Aliens are crazy. The Aliens said well where we come from he's the most powerful thing any way bob wasn't really good for the most powerful thing in the WORLD. So the humans won and they celebrated with ice cream THE END!

Second draft:

Once upon a time there were Aliens about to destroy EARTH! But maybe I could tell the good things about earth to change there minds like god who is the most powerful then there gods .So the green big headed skinny Alien where here everybody was scared and the so called smart powerful president couldn't do ANYTHING.Exept these 3 kind brave friends friends.[The girl said are you shore you want to destroy mother natures planet earth and why! sorry I have to say this but you guys have BIG HEADS ! ] [the little boy added but we have good things on earth like crazy sports and salty snacks.We also don't live on planet MARS.]So the so called scary Aliens got scared like they where little girls screaming for there mommy and went to there rare big planet to talk about what there going to do to destroy the earth. [1 normal day later day later]So they came back.So now it looks like the Aliens vs humans then Monsters vs Aliens. So they both came up with a dangerous evil plan. The Aliens plan was to destroy earth but I don't know why. The humans plan was to tell them good things about earth.So they met in the morning so the little brave girl [ said GAME ON!] the humans first started off with there only weapon which was to tell them good things about earth. Like big green MONEY so they said that there was a thousand dollar bill [which there isn't] then the Aliens where about to destroy our planet like I said a long time ago. Then A MINUTE LATER. The earth started to shake THUMP THUMP THUMP the humans heard a loud thunder like the earth was about to fall to the ground. The aliens forgot they built a bigger scarier one eyed ALIEN! named [BOB wait just Bob yes just bob why would they name someone just Bob isn't it supposed to be scary. Well I didn't have time for very much detail okay]. Anyway so there was Bob but there was something different about scary dangerous Bob we found out he was just a little clown doll. So the little boy said [you Aliens are crazy.] The Aliens said[ well where we come from he's the most powerful thing] any way bob wasn't really good for the most powerful thing in the WORLD. So they failed and the humans won and they celebrated with smooth chocolate creamy ice cream THE END!