GEDS-Dylan

Dear Pen Pals, My name is Dylan and I go to Grace Episcopal Day School. I'm kind and I like soccer very much (it's my favorite sport). I live in Bethesda and if you're wondering I'm 9 and I am in the 3rd grade and I know you're in second. Now about Maryland, when you go down town D.C. the cherry blossoms are very cool! We are close to the White House and several museums, including the Air and Space museum! Well I hope you enjoyed my letter!

Your Friend, Dylan

Tell the aliens a good story about earth or face annihilation!!!

Brainstorm: We play sports we have nice people we love trophies we have good food which fills you up when you are hungry we have dessert mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! we have school we have brains we have soccer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!( wich qualifies as sports) we have friends (which qualifies as nice people) we have T.V. we have swimming (which qualifies as sports) we have movies we also have roller coasters.

Rough Draft: Aliens, we have a lot of fun on earth we play sports like soccer ( which is my favorite ) We have nice people like: Ronaldinho,Imbrahimovic, Robinho ,Barack Obama,and many others I can't fit on one page and aliens please please please please please please don't destroy our planet now where was I oh yah please please. O.K. now aliens no offense but we are not green we do not have 79 arms we do not have 79 legs we have 2 of each and we do ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...............we ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I said no offense Aliens, oh o.k. sorry said the aliens. Thank you all of that stuff I said... why do you attack every second because you have...158 arms + legs so it HURTS! We have DESSERT which is sweet and tastes really good. Now you heard about dessert sports hmm ! You haven't heard of roller coasters! What are roller coasters said the aliens in a grumpy voice. There called roller coasters well I don't know exactly why but maybe It's roller and It's a coaster I don't know but there FUN! It's found in roller coaster parks which are called... 6 Flags, Legoland, that's all I can think of well of course for right now. Uhhhh we knew that said one of the aliens. We did said another one oh yah we did said the same alien. ( there's 200 aliens WOW!) We also get trophies when we do well at something like soccer in the world cup if you come in 1st 2nd or maybe even 3rd. Brazil, Spain and Italy are the best. Which one do you like the best said the aliens all together. I like Spain the best in my opinion someone might like Jamaica the best ( that's where both of my parents are born/from) You can breathe on Earth and we don't live in Jupiter ( the biggest planet) THE END !

Second Draft: Aliens, we have a lot of fun on earth we play sports like soccer ( which is my favorite ) We have nice people like: Ronaldinho,Imbrahimovic, Robinho ,Barack Obama,and many others I can't fit on one page and aliens please please please please please please don't destroy our planet now where was I oh yah please please. O.K. now aliens no offense but we are not green we do not have 79 arms we do not have 79 legs we have 2 of each and we do ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...............we ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I said no offense Aliens, oh o.k. sorry said the aliens. Thank you all of that stuff I said... why do you attack every second because you have...158 arms + legs in all so it HURTS! We have DESSERT which is sweet and tastes really good. Dessert comes after lunch or dinner. We like dessert because It's known for It's sweet tastes and sometimes It's CREAMY inside and it tastes so good Now you herd about dessert and sports hmm ! You haven't herd of roller coasters! What are roller coasters said the aliens in a grumpy voice. There things that go really fast or very very very slooooow and sometimes very calm very calm some are */5 stars some are really good like the five star roller coastercalled roller coasters well I don't know exactly why but maybe It's roller and It's a coaster I don't know but there FUN! It's found in roller coaster parks which are called... 6 Flags, Legoland, that's all I can think of well of course for right now. Uhhhh we knew that said one of the aliens. We did said another one oh yah we did said the same alien. ( there's 200 aliens WOW!) We also get trophies when we do well at something like soccer in the world cup if you come in 1st 2nd or maybe even 3rd. Brazil is one of my favorite the team overall is great is really really good, Spain the defending champs! and Italy the strongest offence are the best. Which one do you like the best said the aliens all together. I like Spain the best in my opinion someone might like Jamaica the best ( that's where both of my parents are born/from) You can breathe on Earth and we don't live in Jupiter ( the biggest planet) THE END !