ISB_Pon

My name is Pon I like green,blue,gold,and orange. My birthday is on March 27.My birthstone is Aquamarine.I have black,I am a boy and have black eyes. I like playing badminton, swimming, bowling, soccer,basketball, throwing darts, and ping pong,and maybe also golf too!!! I have a dog named Brownie. He is a golden retriever.

This is my first draft

Pon Thai people Please alien king don’t destroy Thailand the people there treat you kindly. And if you destroy Thailand you’ll get less rice because the people there that are farmers work very hard to get rice’s, it’s the country that sends out rice’s. The peoples that live there make strange snacks but yummy and they share them too. The people there treat you like you’re in their family. They have maids there to do anything you want for them to do. Thailand also has many nice surroundings/environments, so why do you have to destroy Thailand. Believe me; trust me that if you live in Thailand you’ll enjoy it there. It is very lively there with incredible tasty yummy foods there.

My second draft Please alien king don’t destroy Thailand the people there treat you kindly. And if you destroy Thailand you’ll get less rice because the people there that are farmer work very hard to get rice it’s the country that sends out rice. The peoples that live there make strange snacks but yummy, and they share them too. The people there treat you like you’re in their family. They have maids there to do anything you want for them to do. Thailand also has many nice surroundings/environments, so why do you have to destroy Thailand? Believe me; trust me that if you live in Thailand you’ll enjoy it there.

My final draft

Please alien king don’t destroy Thailand, the people there treat you kindly. And if you destroy Thailand, you’ll get less rice because the people there that are farmers would need to work very hard to get rice. It’s the country that sends out rice’s. The peoples that live there makes strange snacks but yummy, and they share them too. Snacks in Thailand are delicious such as pork on a stick with sticky rice. In Thailand, foods and snacks usually are spicy but it still taste good. A special name for snack in Thai is Knom. The people there treat you like you’re in their family. They have maids there to do anything you want for them to do. Thailand also has many nice surroundings and /environments, so why do you have to destroy Thailand? The environment in Thailand is hot, cold and sometimes rainy. Thailand has many trees and bushes. It is a marvelous place that you might want to visit some day. The environment is safe and friendly, that mean plants and trees there are not poisonous or dangerous. Also the weather in Thailand like storms, firestorm, hurricanes or tornadoes haven’t happen much in Thailand. Believe me; trust me that if you live in Thailand you’ll enjoy it there. Alien king if you already destroy Thailand all of these things would be gone.