isb--Neema

//Hello, My name is Neema and I come from Kenya. I am 7 years all most 8 years old and I was born on April 27. // _

 **THE FINE WEEK ** Neema woke up one Saturday morning and went down stairs. Neemas family was eating breakfast and Neema joined them. Suddenly a U.F.O landed in Neemas back yard. Two girl aliens came out of their spaceship. Neema and her family were surprised! What did they want? who were they? where did they come from? Neema was thinking all that time and then.. her mom  & dad said "would you girls like to live with us?" Neema said "Nooooooooooooooo!" then she said OK no problem.The aliens were very hungry and Neemas family did not have so much food left.So all of them went to K.F.C, MacDonald, Burger king, and the last places they went was pizza hut,Que-pasa and sub way.The next day the aliens had to go back to Mercy land,Before the aliens left they gave them gifts to go back with,food and some money too.Goodbye come again! and the aliens said OK. Neema will never forget the aliens.  Then one week Neema's family went to visit the aliens for a week. Then they all came together for a holiday. They spent that weekend at the beach.

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