OB+-+Kieran+C

=G'day. My name is Kieran. Here are 7 random facts about me.= 1. My favourite fruit is the apple. 2. I was born in Singapore but came to Australia to live. 3. I have two dogs their names are Cleo and Ryder. 4. Once my family took me to the market we had lots of fun. 5. The internet is fun 6. My family like to go to the beach. 7. Pizza is my favourite food.



=AUSTRALIA=

Pavolova is a vary good food. It is crunchy on the out side but sofe on the in side lots of Aussies love to eat it. Lots of people like to eat vegemite to,a salty brown spred that people eat with bread. Hare in Australea we have some think called outdoor barbarqs it' wheare people go outside and we cook meat. My favorit food is meat pie a pie that has meat and gravey on the inside and pastry on the outside.

First draft Alein king don't destory my contry I side why not the king side. Australi has many good food like pavolova crunchy on the out side and sofe on the inside. There are also out door barbarqs it's where we go out side and we cook meat. Lots of aussies like vegemite a salty brown spred that people eat with bread. Meat pie is a pie that has meat and gravey on the inside and pastry on the out side. Now that you herd about Australia don't you think shoud not destory my country Austrail. If you want you can destory all the sceret fattorys and we can make peace I side.

Second draft Alein king don't destory my contry I said why not the king said. Australia has many good food like pavolova crunchy on the out side and soft on the inside. There are also out door barbarqs it's where we go out side and we cook meat. Lots of aussies like vegemite a salty brown spred that people eat with bread. Meat pie is a pie that has meat and gravey on the inside and pastry on the out said. Now that you herd about Australia don't you think shoud not destory my country Austraila. If you want you can destory all the sceret factory and we can make peace I said.

Final draft Alein king don't destory my contry I said why not the king said. Australia has many good food like pavolova crunchy on the out side and soft on the inside. There are also out door barbarqs it's where we go out side and we cook meat. Lots of aussies like vegemite a salty brown spred that people eat with bread. Meat pie is a pie that has meat and gravey on the inside and pastry on the out said. Now that you herd about Australia don't you think shoud not destory my country Austraila. If you want you can destory all the sceret factory and we can make peace I said.