MR_Makala

my first name is makala as you can tell on my picture off to the side on the right side. I am 10 years old and i am in fith grade. I wou Hurricanes, hurricanes, hurricanes! Made by: Makala!!!!! Once upon a time these girls named Hannah ,Elizabeth, and Kassidy went to Naples, Florida summer of 2009 and we were there about two weeks because we went to meet my brother because we wanted to see the hotel he worked at the Ritz Carlton he was a chef there. So –after we got done there we went to go check out the beach and we went scuba diving and we didn’t here the siren telling people get out. Why was the siren going off? Because there was a hurricane coming and at the time a big tide came and we got washed in a big cave and it had cockroaches and spiders and other types of bugs. So I am going to stop the story real quick to tell you about the characters Kassidy is medium height she is bright and she loves to be adventurous and she likes to hang out with her friends when she is not busy. Hannah is best friends with Kassidy and Elizabeth who I will get to in a few minutes but Hannah likes to be adventures just like Kassidy. So now to Elizabeth she loves hanging out with her friends like Kassidy and Hannah. and also Elizabeth loves taking time to read and hang out with her family all of the characters love going on adventure Now back to the story so as we were going further we saw a beam of light oh and remember we are scuba diving but we went further and further and we were all sacred but we were brave and went further and we saw aliens in the light and we were going to go back but we decided to go further and if we died we would die together so as we were going further they were talking to us saying please help us we wont hurt you please. So we decided to take them but we said wait here we have to go do something. So we swam back and every thing was cleaned and we went to go tell my brother and he said sure so we said fine if you don’t believe us come with us. Fine said my brother. So he came with us and we got to the beach and every one was in the ocean having fun and we said just the last time we were here there was no one around because of the hurricane. What hurricane said my brother? We said you didn’t hear the siren we were in the water and we heard a siren you didn’t hear that. No. well some girl said when we went in the hotel she said why were you guys in the poll/ocean. Of course why do you ask? The girl said because there was just a hurricane. So we took the people that didn’t believe us to the cave and they said wow we thought you were lieing and then they said wow now I don’t know what to say because I never think you could find something like this. So the next day we decided to build a house for those aliens and there family’s so they were so excited they didn’t know what to say and me and my friends were like wow there just like those people that didn’t believes so I guess we have to go know. TO BE COUNTIMUED!!!!! ld say i have a favorite subject but i love all subjects.