GEDS-Jewell

Dear Pen pals, Hello,my name is Jewell.I am nine years old. What is cool about me is that I am a great singer. Even my family says that! I live in Washington DC not in

Maryland. But Maryland is a cool place too. It's really busy in Maryland. In fact, my school is in Maryland.It is really fun! But it's probably very different from your school. But anyway, my favorite sport is basketball, I have three trophy's for academic ecxellence, and I have eight certificates for languege arts, science,art,reading,health,writing,history,and math. I talk a lot, but I'm still a good student! What's it like their? I hear you have seventeen classmates.Well guess what? I have twelve classmates! And when we talk, it feels like forty- one people are in the class room! Anyway, my teacher Mrs. Archer is really nice! What about your teacher? Can't wait to hear from you again!

Sincerely, Jewell

Tell the aliens a good story about earth or face annihilation!!!

Brainstorm: we could tell them to stop sinning and start believing we can tell them to go to church once in a while!

we can tell them to learn that Jesus Christ die on the cross to take away the sins of the world we can tell them to don't obey the devil we can tell them to obey your parents(if you have any) we can tell them to don't turn on the Lord we can tell them if they destroy are earth, they can't see the fun that we have. we can tell them that sometimes at JC Penny's we get some money off we can tell them that we have nitendo DS's and that if they destroy the earth they won't be able to see what it's like. we can tell them that we have Rita's and they could probably try some on a hot summer day!

Rough Draft: Once upon a time their lived a queen named Cathy. Cathy was a very nice queen. Sometimes she was sad because she remembered her dear husband - King Charles. He had died when he went off to war.And from that day on, she was the most saddest queen on the earth. But her sadness got worse. One day, a bunch of aliens came to earth and destroyed most of their kingdom. Some people died and some people didn't.So just half of the people were alive. But queen Cathy just had it with the aliens. She had decided that her oldest son would take a space ship up to their planet because she wanted her people to live in peace and she didn't want any more of her people killed. But when she told her son to go up to their planet he took his army of soldiers with him. When they came back in a couple of years they were all full of energy and were shouting for joy because they had defeated the aliens! And now they're world is free and they're be no more fighting and no more killing. Now queen Cathy was really happy and she was never sad again. THE END

Second Draft: Once upon a time their lived a queen named Cathy. Cathy was a very nice queen. She never hurt anyone. She enjoyed the sweet sound of her servant playing music. Sometimes she was sad because she remembered her dear husband, King Charles. He had died when he went off to war. Since he was the leader of war, he got killed first. But only ten people survived war.And from that day on, she was the most saddest queen on the earth. But her sadness got worse. One day, a bunch of aliens came to earth and destroyed most of their kingdom. Some people died and some people didn't.So just half of the people were alive. But queen Cathy just had it with the aliens. .She had decided that her oldest son would take a space ship up to their planet because she wanted her people to live in peace and she didn't want any more of her people killed. But when she told her son to go up to their planet he took his army of soldiers with him. When they came back in a couple of years they were all full of energy and were shouting for joy because they had defeated the aliens! And now they're world is free and they're be no more fighting and no more killing. Now queen Cathy was really happy and she was never sad again. THE END