KR+-+Tamara+M

Hi my name is Tamara! I am going to tell you about my self. I go to Keswick Ridge School in CANADA. My eyes colour is light blue. My hair colour is dirty blond. I love to skip rope. I love horses and puppies also. My favorite thing to eat is cookies and pizza, also apples! My favorite game is monopoly. What do you like to do? I am a girl and I am 10 years old.

My brainstorm...



I love my home cheif Zan please don't eliminate Canada at all risk. I will try to make you a new home if you don't eliminate Canada. Let me tell you why you can't elimate Canada. Canada has so many things like seasons! The seasons are all different! Winter is one of the amazing seasons! The great thing about winter is you can make maple surup and maple candy! The second season is Spring. Flowers blosum, birds are coming back from winter! Moving along to Summer! In Summer is so much fun. There are sports like simming, b-ball, and soccer. Fall is so different then the other seasons! The colours are so amazing. The colours are red,yellow, and orange. Another reason is snow! Snow is white flakes coming from the sky. Lots of poeple wake up from their homes and look outside and see snow on the ground! Little children love to make things like snowballs, snowforts, also snow castles. Snow is fun to play with and play in! Music is diferent sounds and viberations. Hip hop is funky! Jazz is sosos Calm, last but not least music has so many insperations like happy clam sweet and others. My last reason is that you would like Canada alot but only if you give Canada another chance!

Second Draft

I love my home cheif Zan please don't eliminate Canada at all risk. I will try to make you a new home if you don't eliminate Canada. Let me tell you why you can't elimate Canada. Canada has so many things like seasons! The seasons are all different! Winter is one of the amazing seasons! The great thing about winter is you can make maple surup and maple candy! The second season is Spring. Flowers blosum, birds are coming back from winter! Moving along to Summer! In Summer is so much fun. There are sports like simming, b-ball, and soccer. Fall is so different then the other seasons! The colours are so amazing. The colours are red,yellow, and orange. Another reason is snow! Snow is white flakes coming from the sky. Lots of poeple wake up from their homes and look outside and see snow on the ground! Little children love to make things like snowballs, snowforts, also snow castles. Snow is fun to play with and play in! Music is diferent sounds and viberations. Hip hop is funky! Jazz is sosos Calm, last but not least music has so many insperations like happy clam sweet and others. My last reason is that you would like Canada alot but only if you give Canada another chance!

Final Draft

I love my home cheif Zan please don't eliminate Canada at all risk. I will try to make you a new home if you don't eliminate Canada. Let me tell you why you can't elimate Canada. Canada has so many things like seasons! The seasons are all different! Winter is one of the amazing seasons! The great thing about winter is you can make maple surup and maple candy! The second season is Spring. Flowers blosum, birds are coming back from winter! Moving along to Summer! In Summer is so much fun. There are sports like simming, b-ball, and soccer. Fall is so different then the other seasons! The colours are so amazing. The colours are red,yellow, and orange. Another reason is snow! Snow is white flakes coming from the sky. Lots of poeple wake up from their homes and look outside and see snow on the ground! Little children love to make things like snowballs, snowforts, also snow castles. Snow is fun to play with and play in! Music is diferent sounds and viberations. Hip hop is funky! Jazz is so,so Calm, last but not least music has so many insperations like happy calm sweet and others! My last reason is that you would like Canada a lot but only if you give Canada another chance!