MR_CodyB

My name is Cody and I"m 11 years old. There is five people in my family my sister, my brother, my mom, my dad, and me. I have two dogs. Their names are Brutus and Dasiy. I like baseball and soccer. In the fa ll of 2008 I played baseball. I was number 12.

Lost Dog By: Cody B.  “Mom, do I have to go to school today?” I screamed! “Yes you have to.” yelled mom from downstairs. Before I left I petted my dog, Brutus and then I raced out the door to the bus. When I got on the bus I took my seat. I am Cody. I’m 11 years old and I am in the fifth grade. I go to Monroe Road Elementary. I have one of the meanest bus drivers. My bus driver is always late and today was the day she had to come early. (not completed)

=I like How you used I screamed and yelled instead of said.= =I have a question about your bus driver, was she always mean and late?= =I think you need a bit more detail.= I think that u need more and need 2 work on it!